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Re: Prologue
Thanks for the review. I will try to work on my typos and such! I'm only on my rough-rough-draft right now and i will fix the weird pace in a ...
Mar 9, 2015 -
Re: Prologue
Thanks for the review Fal. My problem is that word doc doesn't catch homophones or words not in the right context, Ha! I will get right on editing! Thanks again!
Mar 9, 2015 -
Re: The Ending of Autumn
Good Job, really like he picture you paint!! But I agree with TheWanderingWizard when I say change the title to draw attention. If you would just take a sentence from ...
Mar 8, 2015 -
Re: Chasing Winter
Falcon, that was beautiful... I truly have no words. Thanks for sharing this.
Mar 8, 2015 -
Re: Mortality
I honestly have no words. That is really beautiful and it paints a great picture. Your inspiration must be amazing. I only suggest that you continue writing!! Sorry there are ...
Mar 8, 2015
