Tranquility

I'm not going to nitpick, I'm not saying there is nothing to nitpick, I'm afraid there is quite a bit :) , but all the same I won't, mostly cause ...

hello :) I have to say, I actually loved this poem...I often say that but this time I mean it. :) I also have to say that at first there ...

just a quick reply...I really liked your poem! I have to admit some of the changes suggested would help it's flow but, just to argue, please don't take out the ...

Hey Well, first of all, I really loved your poem, although I will admit that I only liked it the third time I read it....I agree with Rosey on something ...

Hi, :) Just read both of your chapters, even though I'm supposed to be off the computer now, and I definetely don't have the time to I will of course. ...

Jame :) well everyone has basically said what I wanted to say, but just to repeat its an amazing poem, simple on one level but flowing deeper and becoming more ...

hey, Wow, that was beautiful! :) you used all the senses to create what people usually think they can only see. Also, your sentences, and descriptions immediatly give the reader ...

Hey Dreamy! :) I'm your first comment! Which is lucky because I really loved your was simple yet really meaningful. I'm sorry about how they treat you, but just think...you ...

Hey :) ! Unlike most poems on this site, this poem flew way above my head...which is a very good thing. There are loads of amazing poems that I've found ...

hey :) Just to start off, I was amazed!!! I haven't looked at it too closely but everything I read seemed to hit the right note and made me think. ...

Hey! :) Just read a whole lot of your stories and poems etc, you're really good, you make what you write simple but descriptive. I loved your chime! :lol: On ...

got to be quick, its realy late, just read ALL of those chapters and they are AMAZING! I'm not joking, even the ones you didn't like. Its so sad for ...

hey, just wanted to say I really like your stories, this one was a bit confusing but I really loved them both anyway! You must write more on the other ...

wow!!!! Just read every single one of your chapters in basically one go, please write more!! Its just like one of those books I find impossible to put down, except ...

I loved it! :) Although like everyone else I'm gonna say maybe not the 2 by 4 and I'm almost 100% you meant petals. Peddles and pedals don't work in ...