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Thanx when i get enough time to write the third part i will. ~Torpid

You plotting on killing me, ladydark? You wouldn't be the first. I think there's a club by now...

Thank you, Jigsaw, ladydark. What would i do without you? ~Torpid

That's very interesting that is. I laughed. It was cool. Thanx for that piece. ~Torpid

That is funny...and well written ~Torpid

Thanx for the thundering shots, i will use that later. I'm writing more of it now and there is about to be a shooting... ~Torpid

That is strikingly similar to this book i've read but that cool. I was just thinking the other day about asking Rowling if i could write on Sirius's adventures while ...

i've been waiting for someone to reply to it. Thanx for the tumble thing, i thought the same thing. The gnome and decently dressed man in the corner were the ...

Thanks for the facinating remark and wanting to read, zelithon, the well done, jigsaw, and the good overall, ladydark Bard 2 iz out. it is about another character that will ...

He's done lots of work with assassin stories. Who's Ryan?

I really dont think there is going to be any more alien invasion...i wrote it cuz i had come to a dead end...there wasnt much thought in it or effort. ...

there it iz guyz, dig in!

Is this a prologue, a first chapter, or the entire story? Until i know this I will reserve my judgement. otherwise, here are some suggestions: It had reached its peak ...

That was awesome...and your only eleven. Ah, see the foolishness of judging a person by age? That was very good. I like it. I dont come to the Poetry area ...

Aviator, The Alien's are attacking because o' this jemstone which is important for some reason......