Torpid

yea, hes a russian! yeeeyeee!! cool, not as good as the first but rock on!!!

Did you just call Bush a demon? Can you do that? I think the secret service is comin for ya now. Better pack you're stuff. Other than that. Nice little ...

You should probabaly change yuor title dude. Maybe something a little more fitting perhaps?

ok i know its a lil rough, and its never been a very peopular story but come on guys. No replies? its been a long time. no SW geeks out ...

Well now I'm really mad becasue something happened and I lost the next installment, and it was really good. And there's nothing like loosing your work. So im gunna go ...

THANK YUO THANK YOU THANK YOU!! I'll tryto add more soon...

Thanks for the comment! I've been waiting for a while on this story. I actually like the idea so I will write more, and I see what you mean in ...

I read the first part, it was pretty good, I liked it. At first I was imagining it in medieval times but then you changd it. Sooo, I shall read ...

ADD MORE. PART 2! WHEN'S IT DUE?

NICE *Tears of joy stream down my face*

I like em all except for middle eastern, indian etc. and mabe egyptian and chinese, and native american... i guess i really only like european mythology lol

Pretty sweet, but darkling clouds? just didn't sound right to me. but then again, I know nothing of poetry soooo....what do I know?

im kinda rushed right now but theres what i got. i just hope the last sentences didnt sound gay.

i think it coulda been a little 'cooler' as far as descrption and dialogue. pretty cool though. i like the idea of lions runing around 'hunting'.

wow ure sig is huge. and nobody ever said anything about THE BESTEST STORY EVVA bein bad, random, stupid, rubish, even though it might have been slightly funnier gosh....