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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Land of the Free

    Thank you all very much!

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Land of the Free

    Thanks. Of course, I realise this was a harsh generalization of America. I didn't mean any offense to your American people. I was just generalising how some- not all, not ...

    Feb 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: mockingBird

    Thank you! Actually, I separated mocking from bird for a reason. I'm trying to drive across the point that bird- which, you may notice, does not retain its initial lower-case- ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dandelions

    Thank you all!

    Feb 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Deleted 6

    This was bloody brilliant. I'll be back to review it later.

    Jan 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: All There Is

    Thanks.

    Jan 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: All There Is

    Thank you!

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: All There Is

    Thanks! Actually, the style of a villanelle is to have three line stanzas with two repeating refrains, ending in a four line stanza with both refrains repeated. Actually, I have ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: All There Is

    Thank you both. Actually, I hate villanelles, which is what this poem is. It's a type of french poem that follows a pattern with two refrains repeated in an ABAABAABAABAABAABAA ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Fourth Period

    Well, learn something new every day. If you intended it to be humourous, then nice work. Very good poem.

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: 5 Reasons Why YWS Is Better Than Every Other Website

    Sucks to you, Facebook! Preach, mate. Lovely work.

    Dec 29, 2010
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Tabooboo - A parody of Taboo

    ahhhh.... I'm still laughing...... awesome job, you nutter!

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Good Enough to Eat

    @Wolf: Thanks! I actually had it originally reading "through" but I always found myself drawing out the word to make the line flow when reading it out loud, so I ...

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Good Enough to Eat

    Thanks. Would you mind explaining what you found confusing so I can fix it?

    Dec 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Good Enough to Eat

    Thank you!

    Dec 25, 2010


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