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  • My first story-- about 1/4 of it, anyway. Part 1.

    sorry if there's any random words or comments written in-- my friend was helping me title yet.Humans are curious beings:inquisitive, sensitive, rash. The foolish, stupid creatures think they are super

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  • First story-- part 2

    IIClass ended. “Hey,” Sara called out to Nerezza in the hallway. “Are you too stupid to remember that I’m supposed to give you a tour?” She asked, even though she ...

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  • First story-- part 3

    IIISara ran, trying to find somewhere to be safe. Closet, there. Inside, safe. She collapsed on the floor, shivering, covering her face with her clammy hands. No, be strong, She ...

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  • First Story--part 4

    Where does she live? Sara wondered. Nerezza had never said anything about a home or a family (she had said a total of 18 words her entire time at the ...

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  • First story--part 5

    Sara woke up in the morning feeling confident. She was the most powerful girl in the school, the queen. Her pawns needed to be kept in place, and currently, Nerezza ...

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  • First story-- part 6

    “What’s going on out here?” yelled someone almost at the corner. Nerezza waggled her fingers in farewell and melted into the shadows. The rain stopped and the principal, Mr. Nesbitt ...

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  • First Story-- part 7

    Erasing people from existence is a difficult task. It consumed enough energy that I may be able to return to school in a few days time. I do hope that ...

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  • First story-- part 8

    Sara’s head spun and her ears buzzed. She knew she was losing too much blood, but she enjoyed the sensation. She was aware of the pain, but she floated above ...

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  • First Story-- part 9

    Sara stayed in her room until Monday, locking the doors and windows. Nerezza didn’t eat, so neither would she. Her mom had screamed and banged on the door, but had ...

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  • First Story--Part 10

    She opened the door quietly. Her mom was slumped outside, asleep and clutching an iPhone limply. Sara glanced at the glowing screen. Her mom had dialed 911, but had not ...

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  • Jump part 1

    Here's part one of a 3-part story I'm writing for my school newspaper. Enjoy, and critique away!“Jump” said a voice from behind him. The boy turned.“Excuse me?” He asked, slightly ...

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  • First Sory-- Part 11

    She noticed how quiet it was. No thunder rolled from the ominous dark clouds in the sky, and nobody talked or laughed. Her ears buzzed, as ears do in complete ...

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  • First Story-- part 12 *Please Review*

    Hey guys-- I haven't gotten many reviews on any of my last few parts-- so I'm assuming you guys are getting bored of my story. I think I'll just make ...

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  • First Story--part 13 (the last one for now)

    Hey everyone! This is my last installment for now-- I have to type up more! Please review!“I’m… confused.” Sara murmured. “I will give you a miniscule amount of my power. ...

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  • Jump part 2

    Hey all, here's the next part of my Jump story. If you missed the first, here's a now, let us begin!Jump Part 2The boy’s eyes fluttered open, only to shut ...

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  • 4 minutes

    Hey all. This is a story I wrote for Scarrlettfire's contest. It's based on the song "4 Minutes" by Madonna and Justin Timberlake. It's not supposed to be well-written, just ...

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  • Jump *edited*

    So this is a story I wrote for a contest. It had to be no more than four pages, so sorry if some parts are info dumps. I had to ...

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  • Black and Blue ch.1

    So, the title is very much pending. It's really more of a stand-in for when I get a real one. Here is is!Oh, and don't waste your time correcting my ...

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  • Black and Blue ch.2

    Again, I know my quotes are messed up. Don't bother correcting.Class ended. “Hey,” Sara called out to Nerezza in the hallway. “Are you too dense to remember that I’m supposed ...

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  • Black and Blue ch.3

    IIISara ran, trying to find somewhere to be safe. Closet, there. Inside, safe. She collapsed on the floor, shivering. She covered her face with her clammy hands. No, be strong, ...

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  • Lather and Nothing Else- rewrite

    So, for a school assignment, we had to rewrite the short story "Lather and Nothing Else" by Hernando Tellez with a plot twist and in a different location. I placed ...

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  • Epigraphs

    There’s always a hush in a theatre in that millisecond before the curtains open. Just one fraction of a moment where no children are rustling their candy wrappers or sniffly ...

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  • Stream of Consciousness

    So I've been experimenting with stream of consciousness writing where I literally just write anything that comes to me as it comes to me. It sort of forms a story ...

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  • Weeds

    On the past, making mistakes, and saying goodbye.

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  • Green

    A piece from the perspective of a Martha from Atwood's "The Handmaid's Tale"

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We think in generalities, but we live in details.
— Alfred North Whitehead