Tomas

Hi, I happen to like religious topics; I find it quite interesting. There is a lot going on in this poem. I dont think I could ever put a poem ...

Hey Amie, Weird, for some reason the poems format is scattered all over the place but when I hit reply the correct format you orginally put it in, shows at ...

Hey Sarah, I like this.. at first I was a bit hesitant because of the line "A bond as one". I don't find those emotions bond, merely they interact but ...

Boston, Not bad... I always like reading poetry that is open and conceptual and something that is usually never talked about or expressed. My favorite line is "Secret smiles and ...

I definitely appreciate the language you present, and the honesty that comes forth. Your effort is limitless. We talked, we drank, we walked, we were the jazz. I like the ...

Hey Bud... Here goes your first work reviewed; don't worry I won't pick it apart to much. :) I have a really hard time criticizing art, even though I know ...

I didn't care so much for your simultaneous repetition on a few of your words, however, I did like the words you chose. "like the smell of woods" I love ...

I can understand the meaning and feeling to this poem, of course, I think most of us can. I like the title, Troubled Hands. But I liked even more the ...

I thought this was good. It was real feeling thrown out in a poetic format. Its almost like reading this, put me inside the characters head(whether it was you, or ...

I like this. With the whole two hemispheres in the ending, is almost making the poem a metaphor to something. Darkness and light, good and evil, right and wrong. It ...