Toboldlygo

Hey! So, what's happening here is that in the real-time (regular type), Monica and Augustine get engaged, married, and then have a baby. This part of the story is moving ...

Hey! The italics are all memories from her past, but nothing has been revealed yet as to his identity. They're there to give us context for her past and insight ...

Sorry for the double post; looks like my internet was being wonky :P

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Hey, there! Happy review day! Toboldlygo here to do a quick review of this work. :) So first thing I want to say is that you've done a fantastic job ...

Hey! So this is just chapter 1, the next two are published and I'll get 4 up after review day. But what's happening is that everything in the regular type ...

Okay, I see what you're going for there. It just seemed a little confusing at first. :)

Very cute, original poem! This is a great read, definitely enjoyed. Now for the review :) First what I found that was beneficial to the poem. This poem has a ...

Thanks for the review! To answer your question, I looked it up, and most hospitals allow anyone to visit any patient, but those in critical condition in the ICU have ...

Haha, cute!

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This is great! Congratulations on posting your first work here! :) (And there's no special format, just make sure it can be read) I have a few nitpicky things about ...

Thanks! I actually did go back and forth on the names, but decided on the "The Sky Girl" in order to sound a little less stereotypical. I didn't want have ...

Aw, thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :) Yeah, it is kinda funny, but I was trying to play off of the whole "Prince Charming is always an idiot" stereotype ...

Thanks! I'm glad you liked my story! :)

I mean, it's ok the way it is, but it really does read better, in my opinion, at least, if it does. It's up to you, though. Yay District 2! ...

Forgive me, but I really don't think that JRR Tolkien would have approved of this. Maybe you think that romance was "heavily implied," but from reading about the life of ...