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Hello! This is a fantastic poem! It really catches your sensitivity to meeting a particular individual, presumably a former romantic interest but potentially also a dear, beloved friend. I appreciate ...

Hey, there! I must say that I am intrigued by your use of imagery and language. It really added such a beautiful element of imagination and other-worldliness to it! Here ...

Hey there! Happy review day! The first thing I noticed about this piece is that it is a little wordy. By that, I mean that there is a lot of ...

Happy review day! I really enjoyed these little messages. I do think it's interesting that you chose to post them here in this format, but I really enjoy these and ...

Hey, there! Happy review day! Toboldlygo here to give you a review :) So the first thing I noticed is that the main character is speaking as if she's dreaming, ...

Hey, there! Happy review day! I really like what you're doing with this world. It's imaginative and fresh and seems very interesting and engaging to read. A couple things I'm ...

Hey, there! Happy review day! All I can say for a moment is, Wow! Just, wow! Okay, now that that's out, on to the review! This is an incredibly powerful ...

Hey there! Happy review day! I must say, I really LOVE this work! I actually went back to look at the previous two chapters, something I rarely do when reading ...

Hey, there! Happy review day! Toboldlygo here to do a quick review of this work. :) So first thing I want to say is that you've done a fantastic job ...

Happy review day! Toboldlygo here to do one! I'll be honest, at first, I didn't know what to make of this. I definitely like the concept you're going for, but ...

Happy review day! Toboldly go here for a review! :) I must say, I really enjoy this chapter! One thing, though, that particularly stood out to me was the lack ...

Hello there! Toboldlygo here for a pre-review day warm up review! :) I really love this story! It made me laugh and was just an enjoyable, fun story to read. ...

Hey! Toboldlygo here for a pre-review day warm up review! :) First, for some nit-picky grammar-y details. "He looked up at Malkolm, and grinned sheepishly." There shouldn't be a comma ...

Very cute, original poem! This is a great read, definitely enjoyed. Now for the review :) First what I found that was beneficial to the poem. This poem has a ...

This is great! Congratulations on posting your first work here! :) (And there's no special format, just make sure it can be read) I have a few nitpicky things about ...