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Hey there! This is a really deep song! At first glance, it appears to be about a statue lamenting his life as a statue, but it also conveys an idea ...

Hey there! Happy to be reviewing your work this Review Day! Right away, I am intrigued. There is a tempo to this piece that sets the stage for a thrilling ...

I really appreciate how you have a summary of your previously published chapters at the top of the story! It really makes it much easier for people to read your ...

Hi there! First, I wanted to say this is an awesome story! I can tell you really put a lot of thought into your characters and what you wanted this ...

Hello! First off, this is a great work! I really like it. I'm going to give you some general feedback, first, because it's something that's mildly annoying format-wise (but nothing ...

Hey there! Very interesting read! Unfortunately, by the time you get to Chapter 36, it can be a little difficult to understand everything that's going on in the story, even ...

Hey there! Very interesting read! Unfortunately, by the time you get to Chapter 14, it can be a little difficult to understand everything that's going on in the story, even ...

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Hey there! Very interesting read! Unfortunately, by the time you get to Chapter 22, it can be a little difficult to understand everything that's going on in the story, even ...

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Hey there! Very interesting read! Unfortunately, by the time you get to Chapter 19, it can be a little difficult to understand everything that's going on in the story, even ...

Hey there! Very interesting read! Unfortunately, by the time you get to Chapter 10, it can be a little difficult to understand everything that's going on in the story, even ...

Hey there! Very interesting read! Unfortunately, by the time you get to Chapter 25, it can be a little difficult to understand everything that's going on in the story, even ...

Hey there! Very interesting read! Unfortunately, by the time you get to Chapter 19, it can be a little difficult to understand everything that's going on in the story, even ...

This is great! You've done a fantastic job of capturing how your school atmosphere fosters loneliness and isolation. I'm not certain how to read the words you have in parentheses ...

Hey there! Very interesting read! Unfortunately, by the time you get to Chapter 18, it can be a little difficult to understand everything that's going on in the story, even ...

Overall, very nice. You've certainly created a likeable character here. Unfortunately, I don't know much about him (her?), other than that there there is a wife and a baby and ...