TimmyJake

Thanks for the awesome review, Livvy. Yeah, I get the awkwardness there. xD I will edit that... eventually. I have decided to edit nothing until I'm finished, but I will ...

Thank you for tackling this and your wonderful review! :D

Oogar warriors? O_o I thought they were Ooga warriors who transformed themselves into penguins after they ate some bad meat, and so were going to haunt her for the rest ...

Thanks for the review, Livvy! Oh, dear. Hospital gown? I must change that. I mean just a simple white gown, and for some reason I thought hospital gown implied that... ...

Thanks for your amazing review, Pomps! I always reference your work as I do re-writes. I hope I do the perspective thing better as we go along here. I admit ...

OH, yesh. Much. I didn't mind the first title, by the way. Just the spelling. :P

hee-hee No problem. I misspell that stuff all the tiem.

It's right now spelled as: extraor I dinary or something similar...

Do you want it misspelled? :P

Hey, Writer? It's a beautiful poem.

Oh, wow. Reading through Megsug's review makes me feel like a complete dunce. xD All of the run-ons and weirdness was following they style of a published book... Now I ...

And neither shall I. We are pretty steadfast in our ways. xD

Erm, synonyms? And finding words isn't my strong point... xD I shall think about a word. :D

I honestly thought about it for two weeks, but decided that leaving in a huff wouldn't be a good idea even if I wanted to change your mind about them, ...

Thank you for not going on a rant with me.