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Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 11
I think it's just a teensy bit too confusing for me. Maybe a bit more indepth description there?
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.2 Girl
Thank you for your absolutely amazing review, Heather. I just, gah. You make me want to write more and more and more. Oh, and you review crazy fast. xD
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 3.1 Girl
Thank you for your amazing review. Every single time I read one, I cry. :') You help me out so much.
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 87 (Revised)
hmmm... maybe make Conrad beg a little more? Maybe HAVE HIM GO ON HIS KNEES. YES
Oct 7, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy
NOT AT ALL. :mrgreen:
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 2.2 Boy
Thank you for this wonderful review, Heather. I love reading them, and you help a lot with plot and style. As for the dashes, I have been working on them ...
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy
And, erm,
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy
Thank you for your wonderful nitpicks and wonderful wonderfulness of this review, Truant. You point out sooo much that will help me in editing and further chapter. You da girl
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 1.0 Boy
Oh, thank you, Truant. Your review was so amazing and so helpful. :) And, erm.
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 5.1 Ally
Thanks for the review, Tulip. You go get better now. :)
Oct 4, 2014 -
Re: Truant: Chapter Five
hee-hee Thanks, Heather. :)
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: Truant: Chapter Five
It was! It was my longest by almost 6,000 characters. xD Is it too long, you think? I mean, should I write many of them that length? Now, any longer? ...
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: Truant: Chapter Five
oh, you're welcome, Heather.
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: Ordadus- Chapter Five
Amazing review. ^.^
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 4.3 Avery
Thank you, Livvy. Yes, I have that bad habit of just writing out alot, and I will change it to a lot and start writing them properly - if the ...
Oct 1, 2014
