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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 11

    I think it's just a teensy bit too confusing for me. Maybe a bit more indepth description there?

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Affinity 3.2 Girl

    Thank you for your absolutely amazing review, Heather. I just, gah. You make me want to write more and more and more. Oh, and you review crazy fast. xD

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Affinity 3.1 Girl

    Thank you for your amazing review. Every single time I read one, I cry. :') You help me out so much.

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Book Man, Chapter 87 (Revised)

    hmmm... maybe make Conrad beg a little more? Maybe HAVE HIM GO ON HIS KNEES. YES

    Oct 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy

    NOT AT ALL. :mrgreen:

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Affinity 2.2 Boy

    Thank you for this wonderful review, Heather. I love reading them, and you help a lot with plot and style. As for the dashes, I have been working on them ...

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy

    And, erm,

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy

    Thank you for your wonderful nitpicks and wonderful wonderfulness of this review, Truant. You point out sooo much that will help me in editing and further chapter. You da girl

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Affinity 1.0 Boy

    Oh, thank you, Truant. Your review was so amazing and so helpful. :) And, erm.

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Affinity 5.1 Ally

    Thanks for the review, Tulip. You go get better now. :)

    Oct 4, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Truant: Chapter Five

    hee-hee Thanks, Heather. :)

    Oct 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Truant: Chapter Five

    It was! It was my longest by almost 6,000 characters. xD Is it too long, you think? I mean, should I write many of them that length? Now, any longer? ...

    Oct 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Truant: Chapter Five

    oh, you're welcome, Heather.

    Oct 3, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Spiritual Re: Ordadus- Chapter Five

    Amazing review. ^.^

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Affinity 4.3 Avery

    Thank you, Livvy. Yes, I have that bad habit of just writing out alot, and I will change it to a lot and start writing them properly - if the ...

    Oct 1, 2014


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