TimmyJake

BLIND DRIVER? I'm gonna buckle up. :D Just keep both hands on the steering wheel. You're doing awesome. :)

whatcha think of edits, Grace? Any better? ^.^ I am not sure if I like the removal of the extra "a moment with you" or not, but they seemed superfluous.

Timmy has looked at this, and herefore and thereby and everythingelse declares that there is nothing I can do to help you on this piece. It's beautiful, Livvy. The poem ...

Thank youuu sooo much, Grace! I will fix and work on everything you ask for, okay? And I shall write a song a week, and everything else. Thank you so ...

I am still deciding whether to thank you or not. xD

Thank you for the encouraging review!

Thank you for this review! You have no idea how much this has encouraged me. Yes, I agree. I shall fix that line. :) I wrote this in feedpad. xD ...

Thank you for the amazing review, Livvy! You really help me out every time, and always find sooo much for me to fix and work on.

hehe I will see it soooooon, then. :D

hee-hee so whenever you get the time, and not before. Understand? No pressure Yayyy! At least I sort of got it. :D

heyyyy, you did fine! Just a bit of clarification. I think the problem for me was that we had to wait fifteen pages to see Falyn's reaction.... You're doing awesome ...

I just assumed they were because of her sickness, fading in and out of consciousness and all that.... Am I right? :D you take your time and dun worry about ...

Hey, this is considered spamming, especially when you put letters all across the page and just repeat what you're saying over and over. Could you not do this sort of ...

I DID. Especially for you. I had it written probably six months ago, and then rewrote it while I was in the wilderness. xD Now that's a word I haven't ...