TimmyJake

Alright. I worked on it a bit. Still haven't pulled out the fearful, but am thinking of a good repeater to put in there to replace it :)

Its good your stepdad kinda stepped in, but not having your real father around has gotta be tough. Hang in there! ;)

Its good your stepdad kinda stepped in, but not having your real father around has gotta be tough. Hang in there! ;)

Thank you! I was trying to make it like you state! ;)

Ohhh... I get it. Ok! Thanks! :)

Thanks for the review!

Its supposed to make people think. I didn't want to explain everything as I wanted to keep it short. Thanks for the review!

Two words. Funny. Awesome. Keep writing! ~Timmyjake

Wow. This is just a comment... You are doing the right thing if you are trying to get away from all that. Not having a father has gotta be tough. ...

I noticed this because of @fortis This is really cool. Read it backwards and it is the opposite. Write another one! ~Timmyjake

Yep! And if you get a review that you see as negative, just push through it! Don't let it bother you.

No problem! Write more!

Timmyjake here to give you a comment, not a review. This is amazing! So vividly descriptive, full of her pain and her mother's pain. She felt and saw everything, and ...

Just a comment because there is nothing to criticize in this song. Ossum, you should do work for a big-time singer or just produce these songs yourself... Because all of ...

And I just wanted to mention that this is supposed to be like an open door. An introduction full of questions, but without answers. Their are guns, no ballistae, but ...