TimmyJake

Thanks much! I loved your review!!

Alright! It clears it up for me. BTW, if she is putting on a strong front, be sure to say that she is. Happy writing!

Umm.. I feel stupid. :P I will go read them, then!

Something has happened to your story, I mean.

Timmyjake here to write you as long as a review as your story!! And that was your review!! Well, actually, I think something happened to it as it isn't showing ...

This is about him learning to use his imagination. The entire story is something that he imagines.

Thanks for your review! Yes, I agree that it needs some touching up. This is supposed to be a short story that makes the reader think, but not one where ...

Did some editing. Better?

I caught that very well in your story. Don't worry! You achieved what you tried to do. :P And yes, it does do a good job with the whole romance ...

No problem! Hope you get the job!

This whole story, as well as most of my others, were written to make the reader think. Thanks for your review! I see the weak points!

Yep! Write more!!

Haha. Great! I'll be waiting!

You have Ossum talent, Ossum! Keep going! ~Timmyjake

I couldn't think of a better one beside the one you mentioned, so I inserted it. :P It is edited.