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Re: nightmares book
Timmyjake here to give you a short review, Smile!! I love all of your songs you have made. You should sing them sometime! It would bring the words to life! ...
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: The Dove, the Tortoise and the War (Part 2 the Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*
Tiny Tim here to leave you a review! Uh oh, that could be dangerous, leaving my nickname out there for the world to see! :P Onto your review! I'll hit ...
Dec 24, 2013 -
Re: No Winner Left
Timmyjake to leave you a short review! I am terrible at writing poetry, honestly. But i will give you my two cents worth, anyway! :D Some of the lines here ...
Dec 22, 2013 -
Re: Sting
Timmyjake to leave you a short review! I know that with poetry its kind of just how you want with punctuation, but it seems to me as though with the ...
Dec 22, 2013 -
Re: The First Day of Christmas
Timmyjake here to give you a review! I found this a little strange... All sadness throughout, a high fever, in danger of death, etc... Then a partridge and a pear ...
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: Altion- The ignorance of suffering
Timmyjake to give you a short review! Ok, this is VERY GOOD!! I love how easily you can make your reader picture the world in which Skaret lives. To me, ...
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: It's my Birthday !
Timmyjake to leave you a short review. I loved this!! It kind of tells a story. That your parents will never see that you are grown up. They will always ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: The Quantum Mind: End
Timmyjake here to give you a short review! I should probably go and read the other chapters. Reading this one has made me want to go and read the others... ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: What The Heck?? Chapter 1
Timmyjake to give you a short review. I enjoyed this first chapter, but I have a few nitpicks! Here we go!! Ok, so what I noticed in this chapter was ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: Decisions
Timmyjake here to give you a short review. To be honest, I was kind of disappointed at the end. He didn't have any clever ideas. All he did was murder ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: Officer Diane Kingsley #2 The Paradigm Syndicate Saga
Timmyjake here to write you a short review! This story is very good! You have a unique style of writing! Although, in my opinion, it ended to fast. :( Ok, ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: Network of Keys Chapter 7: Cynthia, More of the First Floor
Timmyjake here to leave you a short review! Ok, now I really liked this. You have a talent for writing. You drew me in to your story immediately. I haven't ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: true friend
Timmyjake here to give you a short review! Ok, I just wanted to say that this poem was very touching. It says how deep your friendship with another can be. ...
Dec 19, 2013 -
Re: party time
Timmyjake to leave you a review! Poetry and lyrics is not my strong point. I am not very good at reviewing them, but I will try my best!! :) Maybe ...
Dec 18, 2013 -
Re: Honeymoon in Mars - Episode6(The Articus Voyage - Part2 - Black Hawk Down)
Timmyjake here to write you a short review!! Ok, very first thing I noticed was how you have your characters talk. [quote] Jason: Need to start programming right away. [quote] ...
Dec 18, 2013