TimmyJake

Timmy here for a review!! Nitpicks i ---I think you could get rid of that. It would make the drum roll a lot more dramatic, and besides that, it seems ...

Timmy here for a review! *Salutes* Hello, team captain! I saw the title on this one and was immediately drawn to it. You will have to forgive me if this ...

Timmy here for another review, however late. :D I will get right down to work! :D Nitpicks Then this thing, this baby or child or whatever you will call it, ...

Timmy here for a review!! Nitpicks Her voice was shaking, her breath producing thick white plumes of icy air, but in her eyes I saw a flash of relief. ---A ...

Timmy here for a review!! Again.... You are going to get used to these notifications. hee-hee Nitpicks The consequences of your actions . ---The period is at the wrong place... ...

Timmy here for a review!! So here I am on number two reviews! Maybe you are getting freaked out now, because I have been stalking your works. O_o Nitpicks Her ...

Timmy here for a review! Nitpicks the sun, which will go on shining each morning. ---When you say will go on , it sounds like you are slipping into present ...

Timmy here for a review! Just for your information, I totally ignored you telling me to not read it if I had not watched the movie. I read it, yes, ...

Timmy here for a review! Nitpicks Your eyes were colored crystal blue, like tsunami waves of affection. They stared deep into my soul, I lost myself in your vast sea. ...

Timmy here for a review! So I will just say what I said in part four, even though it will sound quite redundant. Perfect descriptions and pacing. I confess that ...

Timmy here for a quick review!! Sorry I didn't review this sooner! For some reason, when I saw it, I had this idea that I had already reviewed and read ...

Timmy here for a quick review! This poem was so amazing! So full of beautiful imagery! And, while the words are simple, they portray such a beautiful thing... I play ...

Timmy here for a review!! So I will first point out my nitpicks, and then move on to favorite spots and your style so that we are still friends at ...

Timmy here for a quick review!! I decided to take a look at your work, figuring that since you were such an awesome reviewer, your work would reflect that, and ...

Timmy here for a review! First off, I shall welcome you to YWS!! This is a wonderful site to post work like you have done here! This is an amazing ...