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Re: Cookies Anonymous
This will be a short review for a short poem, but it didn't need anything else. It was perfect. I love poems that look not at the deep parts of ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 2.1
Timmy here for a self-proclaimed ammmaaazing review. Ha! See if you can prove me wrong here. :P I am really impressed that you continue to write this, Livvy. Not because ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: In My Arms, You'll Be Safe...
Timmy here for a quick review! Go salsa! (Can't believe I am cheering on a sauce. :P) This was a very interesting story, and every well written. I enjoyed the ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: My sister sings songs
Timmy here for a quick review! I will be like a wraith, slipping past. All you will see will be my cloak--the bright orange cloth flashing past. And you will ...
Jun 28, 2014 -
Re: Trembling Power: Chapter One
Oooooh! Two writers. This is becoming the thing on YWS, and I can see why. Its amazing. I am currently working on a story with an user, and am enjoying ...
Jun 27, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God-Chapter 4
Hey sis! Now usually I don't review your works, and it's because I always am subjected to reading them before you post them, anyway. xD But I think with this ...
Jun 27, 2014 -
Re: celestial morons
Timmy herrrree! Normally, I don't review your poetry, and its because I feel so inept at reviewing such pieces. You have shown and taught me so much with writing poetry, ...
Jun 27, 2014 -
Re: deleted #2
Timmy here! Sorry I am here late, but I needed to get my cape adjusted, and my mask was still at the dry launders... Sorry, but its wool. Other materials ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 6.2
Timmy here for a review! For once, I may actually be on time. What a relief! Normally, I am days behind the other reviewers, getting in only the nitpicks that ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: deleted #1
Timmy here for a quick review! What can I say for this piece, really? I loved its flow, and how your style moves. Its almost like the water you describe ...
Jun 25, 2014 -
Re: 1
Helloooo! Timmy here for a quick review! So this is a simple poem. There are no floral scenes described, or tender caresses swooned over. This is a poem that I ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Fly Boy: Chapter Two
Timmy here! I admit that I have never reviewed or even read one of your works, but I truly have no idea why. This piece was amazing in so many ...
Jun 24, 2014 -
Re: Bruise-Blue
Timmy here for a short review! Man, you should have given us some warning before you do such a terrible thing to your characters--and i had just started to like ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Grimm 1.2
Timmy has decided to join the party of already awesome reviewers... Tis hard to find anything really to nitpick on this piece, since everyone else has found them so beautifully! ...
Jun 23, 2014 -
Re: Grimm 1.1
I am totally with Silverlock. You are two of the best writers on YWS, and I just love both of your styles. I couldn't resist popping in when I say ...
Jun 22, 2014
