TimmyJake

Timmy here! There isn't much to say or nitpick here, as you have so many wonderful reviews below me, but I'll try and give you some helpful advice before I ...

Timmy here! So this will be a shorter review than usual, but I will try to fit in as much as I can in few words, okay? Running short on ...

Timmy here! So the beginning was like, Woah! - the whole house is blooey. Not like I didn't expect that, with the whole spells and stuff going on all over ...

Timmy here! So it seems as though Deanie has gotten everything I would have snatched for commenting on this chapter, so I think my review, in order to retain it's ...

Timmy here! Since I can't find you online... this will have to suffice for chatting, okay? :P I don't actually have any nitpicks on this work, or at least that ...

Timmy here! This will be a short review because, even though it's full of fun action, there isn't much to talk about. Let's get started. Afterward, Christian remembered little of ...

Timmy here! Hmph. Now I don't know what to say, thanks to your reviewers below. There is, sadly, a downside to being the last reviewer each time. You aren't left ...

Timmy here! The fairgrounds... That wouldn't be close to the gardens, would they? If so, perhaps we could find out why whatsherface sent Liza and Christian to the wrong places. ...

Timmy here! This piece is a little longer than most (nothing wrong with that. I enjoy normal size chapters), so I am going to go through with a few nitpicks ...

Timmy here! This is gonna be a quick review, because I can't think of much to say. When I read the title of the chapter, I went "hehe, finally." And ...

Timmy here! So this was an... interesting chapter, one that I hadn't expected to see, and thought was rather weird, but whatever. I will go through this in an attempt ...

Timmy here! Let's do something strange and go through nitpicks first, shall we? I know it's out of the ordinary, so take a deep breath and repeat after me, "I ...

Timmy here! Since this piece is pretty long, or actually really long, I shall review as I go along, okay? Using one hand I pulled out the syringe. Comma after ...

Timmy here! First thing I noticed when I saw this: Where on Earth is Fleta? I did see and get the part in the middle where Jay goes and recollects ...

Timmy here! This will be a short review, because I don't know what I can add to Deanie's review... but I will do my best to help with anything I ...