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Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 29
Timmy here So this Trina is turning out to be quite the character! I just loveeeee her. Every time you have a chapter with her, we get to know a ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 28
Timmy here Do we have a bit of possible romance in this story? hehe This should be fun to read. I honestly had no idea that this was coming, and ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 27.
Timmy here! Um, wow. I looked at the beginning of this chapter, and I was like, "Whaaa?" - this sure seems weird. But after I went through and read it, ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 28 Part 1
Timmy here! So I see what you have done in this chapter. >.< Not only did you give us such a brilliant path to follow in the mind of Falyn, ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: Untitled: Chapter 8
Timmy here So one thing I am noticing as we go throughout this novel is that the technical errors are[I] increasing, and it isn't a big problem. But I think ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Eyes Wide Shut 9.2
Timmy here This may be a little shorter than my usual reviews, because I have already looked and given my opinion on this - some while back in the distant ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: xi xiv
Timmy here I came to review this work with the intention of nitpicking this piece, and just pulling it apart to find lots of stuff to help you with... but ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 26.
Timmy here So with this chapter, we see her father's death. Not just the little smidgeon we got in the beginning, where we just know he is dead. We see ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 25.
Timmy here So this chapter really said a lot. I actually enjoyed this part with Trina, and it just seems so weird, but fitting - so fitting - how she ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: Transforming Power
Timmy here! This is just a little long . O.O So I thing, due to the length, I will just go through and comment on the piece as I read, ...
Nov 16, 2014 -
Re: How to post a plagiarized work on YWS
Timmy here *coughscoughs* So I am supposed to be reviewing works out of the Green Room, so I will try and find something to, uh, nitpick in here. So I ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 24.
Timmy here! First thing I noticed: you had to tell us this was a dream in order for us to know that. In writing, if the author must inform us ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Imaginary Friends - 13: Sweet About Me
Timmy here So sorry I am a bit late. Usually, I do get to your pieces within a few hours, but this time I had some stuff I had to ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 23.
Timmy here So I will just go through and see if I find anything as I write. Looking through this piece, and just reading it, I don't really see anything ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Suck it up (I can't)
Timmy here! So this is a style of song I am not accustomed to, really. So you will have to excuse me if I mention anything that is either full ...
Nov 15, 2014