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Now it is me coming in with the super late reply. I feel like you shouldn't worry so much about repeating names/the word "Mom". Most readers will just gloss over ...

Alrighty. Interrupting my string of Rebel reviews to read Eternal Beauty :3 Annnd immediately have to agree with Messenger here, that is definitely the same chapter again.

and that is also very Nine-coded! The science! Also time is the reason lakes reflect? O_O I think I like this the most so far :3

I kinda would prefer it if someone else also read Syboleth first before you post moe @.@ I am enjoying this more because I finally have all the context :3 ...

well, i did mention a few fault lines in the review (we never see them do anything but the plot) so maybe you could start with that? MC doesn't feel ...

Yep. Meant chapter 15, my bad @.@

I really like the final line of the poem :3 I continue to enjoy Lavender's riddles even if I have no clue what's happening in this one!

Couldn't Garrett just get a random message from Charlie after not talking to him for a few years (ever since they arent room mates anymore) and be like "alright, let's ...

Just saying I reread ch13 in preparation for Ch14 and I still really don't like how you showed the flashback. It feels so ... disjointed and I got extremely frustarted ...

Everything goes back to Nine =D

Well then I was wrong to delete my reference to Nine =D

Hia, I'm not good with poetry but I still wanted to look at the stuff you posted. I do notice ppl who write reviews so here I am~ I like ...

Hi Razel, I'm no good with poetry but I like the way you review and figured I would check if you have any works in your portfolio :) I find ...

Aww I'm so happy you read a piece of Nylon :3 I would recommend reading the rest of the chapters eventually; it is an interesting story after all and hey, ...

What I mean is more that it isn't really enough to say that the next chapter will do all these things because we need something here to make us want ...