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Re: Crawlers - Chapter Sixteen: The Warehouse (REWRITE)
Hmm if the bf is in Clem's group we need a REALLY good reason for how they started dating.... because it sounded like tensions were pretty high from the beginning ...
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Re: Crawlers - Chapter Sixteen: The Warehouse (REWRITE)
Depends on how Cry ended up backing Clem. What he saw in her. I think it would also work if Greer had a bit of... idk fear of Clem? Like ...
Aug 11 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter Sixteen: The Warehouse (REWRITE)
If she has punishments she also needs ways to enforce them and I don't see how she could
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Re: WoS Chapter 1 Part 1: Zoe
Of course this helps :3 I'm not yet sure how to make the rather long exposition-y scenes more palatable since we are gonna slowly, slowly explore what the Digital World ...
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Re: 2: A quarrel
For the record, a gushingly positive review is perfectly valid if they bring receipts xd That said, I like your writing style and romance is my least favourite genre so ...
Aug 9 -
Re: Uh, This is Weird [Ch. III, Nine]
well you read the best manga and a manga everyone seems to agree is good, so you're golden =D
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Re: Queen Bee
lol imagine vulpesvelox was online and also reviewed this before I could. Then Alex would have had to post yet another poem to make me get to the required 1000 ...
Aug 7 -
Re: The Kudryavka Sequence [Ch. XXII, Nine]
Had a thought abt the descriptions: I think this would work better if Six drifted half-way of comparing the clothes to her own style, commenting on wether she would wear ...
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Re: WoS Ch12 - On the Ropes
So, finally having a bit of time after Review Day :3 Thanks LayLay for reading this story, that is so important to me :3 If you ever find yourself struggling ...
Aug 4 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 6} Chapter 13 (Part 2)
lol relatable =D
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Re: Tristan’s story-Siren’s Desire
Works leave the Green Room after 7 months, regardless of how many reviews they have. (idk why it is 7 months tho)
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Re: WoS Ch12 - On the Ropes
You know what the series had to say about Gotsumon? (one specific Gotsumon but extrapolated to the rest of them) Japanese Dub (rough translation): Gotsumon is a bully. English Dub: ...
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Re: WoS Ch11 - Part 2
Hey LMS VII ppl, rejoice! We finally find out where that story intersects with this one! Cover Art and in-story pictures are screenshots from Episode 10 of the Original Show. ...
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Re: WoS Ch11 - Part 1
Another long one. If you do plan on reading the second part of this chapter right after, feel free to ignore the questions and just earn your review points your ...
Jul 31 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter Six: The Farm
You might need to edit a bit faster XD No work can be uploaded during review day~ To be very honest, I am reading this story for a few reasons ...
Jul 31
