Tikaya

Hah given how I'm struggling with liking any of the stuff i write for LMS (there's a reason i wish ppl would check out the OG story instead lol), it's ...

I love answering questions the author asks so ofc I would answer yours XD (I do that with all my stories too, putting questions in the comments!) As for the ...

Good morning! Told you I’d be reading this one today :3 Then I saw I already did that... so here's just me, wondering if you meant "Muerte" in the first ...

I did wait for the best moment to read all of it in one go =D I don't think jumping forward was the problem, more the not telling the readers ...

Hehehehe if you do want to read another cool character with They/Them pronouns, may I recommend @Ventomology's Loosely Lawful ? Why yes, I am recommending this to everyone lol

maybe you could reiterate that it is cardboard and spend an entire sentence on this, with cause and effect?

I always find it helpful when ppl point out where my typos etc are so I had hoped it helped you too

aww canopy

Ah a long one. But it was very necessary; I couldn't cut anything @.@ 1) What's your initial reaction to the chapter? 2) What were your favourite parts and why? ...

Any time :) And if you have any questions, let me know!

Aiaiaiai, so maybe this Poppy really wasn't loved by her family then!

I'm glad you liked it!

No worries :3

In German, Elise is a woman's name xd You might be looking for Elias? That's a similar-sounding male name! And I think I mentioned what I'd do instead, when it ...

I rly appreciate these thoughts. Thanks for sharing!