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Re: Crawlers - Chapter Sixteen: The Warehouse (REWRITE)
Well well well. The rewritten Chapter 16. Let’s see if knowing Clem and Greer beforehand can turn things around :3 They did what Clem told them to do. Ohhhh what ...
Sep 9 -
Re: World of Souls - Prologue
Hello….victim 😊 Just gotta say while it was midnight and I was sad was not the best time to answer your review, that’s why you had to wait until now. ...
Sep 9 -
Re: Fury in the Wind chp.1 - The Foreign Battalion
You adding the Spain thing made me confused. Before I was just kinda glossing over the foreign words and figured they'd make sense eventually.
Sep 7 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter Eleven: The Warehouse
I know
Sep 7 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter Eleven: The Warehouse
This is perfect :3
Sep 7 -
Re: Loosely Lawful | 8
I like how we both focus on different aspects of this story
Sep 6 -
Re: ..
AI unfortunately steals from real books q_q (from all of us) so no wonder the very common phrases get flagged all the time :/ Ah well, the brain fog thing ...
Sep 5 -
Re: Sunlight Through Concrete Rain - Part 4 (still WIP)
Sounds good enough for me XD As someone who writes combat scenes that ppl tell me are compelling, I'm deeply intrigued :3
Sep 2 -
Re: World of Souls - Prologue
Good afternoon! It took me a while but I finally freed myself from the other responsibility to give your review proper time XD First of all: AWwww thanks for going ...
Aug 31 -
Re: The snake I nurture
Well then another one from the bookmark. The dice do favour you =D So, the summary… *squints to see if there are any metaphors to find there* there… have been ...
Aug 27 -
Re: The Weight of a Soul
Hia Ellie, have come to you in my efforts to work on my bookmarks :3 The pressing question is even: what is the weight of a soul, period. Not just ...
Aug 26 -
Re: all i'm sure of is that he's someone i've always known
Hia! Still going through my bookmarks so I hope you can bear with me =D I remember I bookmarked this over the intriguing summary :3 I do like the myth ...
Aug 26 -
Re: Exploring universe and me
Hia Alex, catching up on more of my book marks :3 I know, I know I am in the middle of replying to your reviews but since my list of ...
Aug 26 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter Seventeen: The Farm
But more importantly, how did I do? =D What's my grade!! If you want opinions on characters you should ask that directly: What do you think abt Macey? If you ...
Aug 25 -
Re: Sunlight Through Concrete Rain - Part 3 (still WIP)
Happy to help :3 Now go write reviews too XD Because I have learnt that reading other people's works helps in understanding your own writing too~ the Green Room is ...
Aug 24
