Tikaya

No worries and thank you so much for taking the time! I'll see what I can do about making ppl feel less lost! Thanks again and have a good day ...

I'm glad =D You could answer the questions to give me a bit of an overview of what you liked and disliked :)

Well guess somone else will have to write 2 reviews then XD

creeper. I know. My point is: What is she doing here when she is not relevant FOR THIS PLOT. It feels like you're not listening to what I'm saying.

Tskkk this American Defaultism =D Pepperidge Farm remembers (Lol)

I know who Andrew is. I mean that you didn't say it here and it is kinda relevant.

Thank you so much for the explanation :3

Thank you for the reply :) I like that the poem can be left open to interpretation :3

That's because yws review comments don't accept certain punctuation marks :( Ah but why didn't you put the effort into editing before posting it here? At least reading over it ...

You can try and edit it :) You just can't edit these comments.

See this is what I mean. I'm not very good with religion! My apologies for the wrong assumption and thank you for the reply!

Thanks for the reply :3 What's important abt the scene where the others feel "forcefully included". Of course you can keep it like that. I still feel that it would ...

Just went over this chapter again and oh wow that line is so insidious now: %u201CCan you believe that? Talking to other girls when he already has me?%u201D Maybe Sugei ...

I will read the entire story, dw XD If you have anything else you'd like me to read let me know. And I think I see what you mean abt ...

That is an AI protection measure that you only encounter if you copy the text from this site somewhere else or use AI to write your review.