Tikaya

Ohhhh. Yeah, that makes sense!

Thanks for your reply! I'm really looking forward to reading the first chapter which I have put on my list for the day that the Green Room feels less... overful. ...

No no, I got that it was a knife! I wonder if it meant something that it's silver since that's usual one of the metals that can ward off fairies ...

Never fear, speech tags are easy. If it's something that can be reasonably interpreted as a speech verb, it's with a comma instead of a period. Things like "say"or "whisper" ...

Well that is very vague. And with a poem so short, not sure what else you want me to say. I told you what I liked and that I didn't ...

Oh that is really sad and you can feel the emotions in every line. I'm sorry this happened to you :( It's really haunting that no matter how old one ...

I like the line about the eyes melting into her. I don't like the general description of her though (too much use of pretty) but maybe that is just because ...