Tikaya

Hia! Have another one of my reviews 😊 Ohh boy I did not expect that twist @.@ I rly like how you have these longer lines in the beginning but ...

I like your writing style. It’s very easy to get into and descriptive. I also like how you use this sentence for characterisation: “ For gentle women with pasty arms ...

And next chapter immediately after. At least the formatting is left-aligned this time =D Oh I like this line: “Caden’s face was a study in tight control” I do wonder ...

Huch I realised I read the first chapter but none of the following. Let’s rectify that =D First up… having everything centre-aligned makes this feel more like a … poem ...

Hi Lavvie! I already love the name of your poem! I'm not sure what you mean by "your face is a willow"; it doesn't really seem to fit the ocean ...

Hi hello! Your story has come up in my Green Room sweep so bear with me 😊 Ohh I can so get behind Nathan here, what an obnoxious reaction of ...

And lookit, you get another review from me today 😊 Hmm I like the first verse, can really vibe with the first two lines, they set a nice rhyme. I ...

Ok, final chapter of this for today. More tmr, I hope. The Green Room does wait… I stumbled over “During this incident” because idk what incident Legion means. A reminder ...

Have I mentioned that the sorting functions on YWS are a mess. Like, even if you look at the sci-fi stories and go alllll the way back to nov 23, ...

Alrighty, new day, new chapter and enough Green Room done to ease the conscience. Let’s go! Hui, I didn’t expect them to use laughing gas. I remember I got the ...

So. I read it. First sentence is nice. Pls do better paragraphing in this one: “Ah shit, here we go again – “ It hard to read ☹ You didn’t ...

Well fellow Green Room apprentice. I have come for your work.... And immediately I'm kinda sad because there's not more to go over. You didn't give any indication on what ...

Hello and good day to you! What an evocative poem. I like the way you structured it. That the // clearly separate the lines but it still feels like a ...

I like the idea of a fanfic abt a poem. So let’s go. Hm my first thought is that this seems a recurring thing now. I remember Perdita. I remember ...

Alrighty, look what I found. Another part of this in the Green Room so bear with me 😊 I like that they have to get rid of the horse :3 ...