Tikaya

Okay I am so lost without the context of the previous chapters BUT! I am always a sucker for people being afraid of others being kind to them. Already you ...

Read about your difficult IRL sit. Hopefully you can come back 😊 In the mean time, a review! I like the beginning but I find the description of the camp ...

Time for another context-less review. I have come right now bc of the contest but I would have gotten to this eventually anyway 😊 I really like the beginning of ...

Hi there, person who begins with “L”. Congratz for being prioritized bc of the review contest 😊 Oh I just realise this is not a normal story. This is basically ...

Looki here. I have come for one of your stories after all. Thank the contest =D First thing first: paragraphing. That would really, really help with readability! Even in the ...

More poems… Ahh alright, I try my best! For the contest! I appreciate that you separate the lyrics into bridge chorus etc. Makes it easier to keep track of some ...

Okay this is not as easy as the 2min reading time suggests xd Hi, you get priority bc of the review contest. So. Let’s uhm, review some paintings I guess. ...

Hi this one also got priority because of the review contest, so here I am. I wish I was better with poems, so bear with me 😊 Ohhh I get ...

Hi hello, your poem got a bit of a priority boost bc of the review challenge. Let’s see if I can write a worthy review. Already I’m almost intimidated because ...

Ah I remember your other story. That is the direct sequel, huh? Last time Mena heard about the curse and now Henry knows that she knows and doesn’t care. While ...

3 Stories by Silvern and we are back here again. Hi creeper. Will do your remaining FNAF fics now 😊 Oh you can feel the denial oooozing from the page! ...

Ohh intriguing start to the chapter! And I love the descriptions and everything. You don’t understand! It’s so nice to read!! Oh and this an interesting thing to hear in ...

Alright next chapter. Some more nitpicks! „Leilan’s voice audibly almost gave“ I feel like “audibly” really overloads this sentence. Just leave it out 😊 “when his next sentence sent her

The sorting function of the Green Room failed me. Otherwise, I would have ofc begun reading your story with this chapter. [Still not from the beginning. Maybe one day. When ...

And another poem to round this out 😊 I especially like this sequence here Nowhere to call your own Not really like you had much of a home This one ...