Welcome to my fanfiction of Carrie by Stephen King! This is a fanfiction where I fix the things I didn't like in the original, and use my own writing style. Note that I've also only watched the movies (1976 and 2002).
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I agree that this is unreviewable because it is not a work of fiction, nor an essay, nor an artwork, nor... anything else that can be "reviewed" on this website. The list of such creative material goes on.
My advice to you is to read the book. Know what you’re altering. You may very well have feelings about the films, and that’s fine, but a fanfiction that sets out to "fix" the original text must, at the very least, engage with the original text. Fanfiction, despite sneers it sometimes receives, thrives on the writer’s deep familiarity with the source material, enough to twist and rebuild it from within. Films are telephone-game retellings, each warped by its director’s obsessions, era, budget, anxieties, and so forth.
So no, I cannot review this... I can, however, read any chapters if you choose to publish them. Read the book.
Well fellow Green Room apprentice. I have come for your work.... And immediately I'm kinda sad because there's not more to go over. You didn't give any indication on what specific things you're fixing so this proof of concept doesn't really do anything. Please be more specific next time and maybe also add a bit of your writing too!