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Re: A Fishy Situation (if I were you)
I’m a bit confused. Is this the sequel to Finley’s story? They have the same cover art after all…. But you didn’t really name them after each other so the ...
Jul 22 -
Re: An Embarrassing Anomaly (if I were you)
Good afternoon! I do like that you start with this piece of dialogue! I just feel like it takes a bit too long until you built off of it (aka ...
Jul 22 -
Re: Raisa’s diary entry (5/19/1955)
Good morning creeper! Since we had an Aeliana piece earlier, it’s only fair we get to have more Raisa now too. Hmm so if I get this right, right NOW ...
Jul 22 -
Re: A broken legacy
I want to preface this with: I find the way you wrote your summary very strange and actually really off-putting. I’m not really sure what you want to tell us ...
Jul 21 -
Re: Against Cynicism: Batman's No-Kill Rule and Superman's Goodness as Enduring Moral Ideals
Well with chi indisposed it is time for me to read more of your essays :3 I also got into DC through Teen Titans~ It actually was one of the ...
Jul 21 -
Re: And so, it begins (part one: LJ’s POV)
Ohhh Aeliana time! Let’s go! Such a fitting comparison: spiraled in his mind like the broken down rollercoasters in his circus dimension I feel like, despite knowing all the characters ...
Jul 20 -
Re: It's... just...fences
Must say my first thought when reading the summary and title kinda went “Yellow Wallpaper?” and “Backrooms?” so let’s see what it is actually about! :3 I feel like, since ...
Jul 20 -
Re: Boss's point of view
Good morning! I saw your wallpost abt this story but I didn’t feel like I’d have much to say without first seeing the story itself. So let’s read this piece ...
Jul 20 -
Re: Into the doll
Hia creeper! The honour of my final review of the day goes to you~ Hmm I think I would have liked a description of how the soul looks like and ...
Jul 19 -
Re: I don't love you anymore
Hia! I saw the reviews you were doing and wanted to give back, even if I’m not that good with poetry :3 I really like this phrasing: i wore your ...
Jul 19 -
Re: how does it feel to almost die (part one)
Hia friend! I want to preface this by saying: I’m glad you survived! Now let’s read what you made of that experience… Ohhh the fact that all this is real ...
Jul 19 -
Re: Name
Good afternoon to you! How do i teach her that ive always been him, but wasnt free? I find this such a good and poignant question. And in general I ...
Jul 18 -
Re: The dirt is staining red in Nigeria
Hia cherie! Ohh more religious mentions… Ah I am so not good with those… But I’ll try my best! This feels like a very raw poem, raw emotion and a ...
Jul 18 -
Re: seeing ghosts everywhere
Hia and welcome! Poetry is not my strong suit but I wanted to take a look anyway (tho I feel like a good summary would go a long way!) I ...
Jul 18 -
Re: rooted
Hia candy! Hope you’re having a fantastic weekend :3 Ohha I guess this heads into the territory of religion. I am left very confused by the first stanza. That’s what ...
Jul 18
