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Re: Chapter One - Unnamed LMS VII Novel
Hia leaf! Let’s see what Eduard is up to 😊 Oh what a visceral scene we are starting on! I do like how Eduard narrates this, kind of detached but ...
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Re: Crawlers - Chapter Three: The Farm
Good afternoon~ Let’s see where the crawlers take us now! Ohhh “That’s not how they got in” Oh that sounds ominous! Interesting that she got that impression from the crawler ...
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Re: Candy for a friend
Good morning creeper! As promised, I bring you a review =D Also, lol I will get a 40 point bonus because I read so many of your works in this ...
Jul 28 -
Re: Crawlers - Chapter Two: The Hosptial
Well then, since I just read Ch1, let’s head straight into Ch2 😊 Write reviewwwwssss Uhmmm are you sure that you want to write that the screams are echoing behind ...
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Re: Crawlers - Chapter One: The Farm
I know winter wants to do a full review eventually, but for now, you have to settle for me 😊 Also also, I know what it’s like for YWS to ...
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Re: I CAN'T GO!
I was wondering how you could fit three stories into less than 2 minutes of reading time… And I must say, that the formatting of this one doesn’t look quite ...
Jul 27 -
Re: ,,Please, make it go away''
Wanted to read some more of the Novels/Shortstories I missed out on so here I am 😊 I like the juxtaposition of the beautiful landscape and the mixed feelings of ...
Jul 26 -
Re: Movies at Randy’s!
Annnnd last one for today :3 Hmm I don’t rly like how this begins. It feels very repetitive. Like you have two mentions of door in the first paragraph alone, ...
Jul 26 -
Re: Why did she love him at all?
And yay more LJ! You are starting to win me over on him btw (I generally do not like murderous ppl, be they clowns or no xd) Oh is this ...
Jul 26 -
Re: Two cursed young girls: Part One (Nina Alexandria Hopkins) Chapter Fourteen: Time to go home
Next up, more Nina and Alyssa. Had to remind myself that this is indeed NOT Aeliana LOL Hmm I feel like this first sentence, needs a bit more explanation. Why ...
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Re: Sam’s nightmare
Felt like reading a few more of your stories today. Starting with this one. I do like the image you create in the first paragraph! I am not so sure ...
Jul 26 -
Re: Help, I've Fallen Overboard
I must say I’m a little confused about your summary. What’s with all the “ahh”s in it? Is it to convey uncertainty? I’m sure there are better and more engaging ...
Jul 26 -
Re: Drown Well Oaks twisted reality
Good morning! I am a bit behind on Green Room work (and will be for the foreseeable future) so I only get to your story now. Hope you’re having a ...
Jul 25 -
Re: freezing point - chapter 3
Good morning Nori! Saw you uploaded this yesterday and marked it down for first thing in the morning ;3 Love the description of adrenaline “seeping out of” the feet! Tho ...
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Re: Holi and her
Hia Alex! I saw you had this in your featured works so ofc I had to go and check it out, eventually =D I like the unfamiliar words sprinkled into ...
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