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Re: Mission Critical: Race Against Time - Prologue
Good morning! With 1 in 12 odds your story was finally chosen =D My first impression is actually that the story looks very evenly spaced. All the paragraphs have basically ...
Apr 10 -
Re: The Council of Terra - Part 1
The odds were 1 in 14 but Council of Terra was still chosen =D I love that you put pictures in your stories :3 I like the first paragraph! It ...
Apr 9 -
Re: Dear Professor Caesar
Well if half of the tombola entries are you , no surprises I have come for your work again =D Good morning Rebel! Hmm the first two sentences are basically ...
Apr 8 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 8: On Tasks and Turmoil
Well I was a bit of a goofy goober and so I had to reroll today’s tombola winner. And hey, congratz, it ended up Syboleth! Also do you know how ...
Apr 7 -
Re: The Final Kiss (By Jasmine)
The Dice have spoken! Here’s the April 6th review~ I really like the flow and rhythm of these lines: Many ways and paths have Been stitched in sorrow and Wrath ...
Apr 6 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 7: Meeting Elliot
My Elliot is an AI hypothesis is going strong. So. He has been helping her through the homework now, huh? But I’m glad she’s at least doing the work herself. ...
Apr 5 -
Re: It's You, My Love
April 4th review~ OH I love this rhyme: I don't need to look above, For it's you, my love. Awww!! I also like the image of cracks in the sky ...
Apr 4 -
Re: The First Question (By Lavender)
Hia Rebel! There we go, April 3rd review and the dice chose the Green Room one. The dice do be knowing me very well =D Let’s see, idk if you ...
Apr 3 -
Re: Julius Caesar
I know this wasn’t your intention, but I did have this poem on my list so: congratz on getting the April 2nd review :3 Hmmm again this kinda feels like ...
Apr 2 -
Re: Centaur Stage CHP 2 {Sanders Sides Fanfiction}
Good morning, recipient of my April 1st review, randomly chosen from the Green Room! :3 Last time, we found a strange person on the port and we couldn’t drive them ...
Apr 1 -
Re: Sinister six Richardson stories
Good morning! This has been sitting on my todo list for a long time! So let’s look at six more Richardson stories! They are certainly something! I wouldn’t really call ...
Mar 31 -
Re: At The End of it All
Good morning! I have noticed your recent review spree and I’m always happy to read what fellow reviewers have in store :3 Even if romance is the one genre, I ...
Mar 30 -
Re: The Franchise
Whenever I want there to be a space between paragraphs, I add a "oOo" and colour it white XD That way, there is at least a free space and it ...
Mar 29 -
Re: Syboleth ch. 6: Social Medium
I lost my top spot for daily reviews and cannot let that stand. So here, I finally come for one of your chapters and I hope you’re happy. Ohhh I ...
Mar 28 -
Re: Giovanna’s origin
Okay loooong story. And again, I feel like you could really try and work on making your scenes longer. As per usual, it’s really hard to get into the story ...
Mar 28
