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Re: The Means to Travel: A U.S. History Screenplay Assignment (Scene's 17-18)
Hi Tao! Here for the final section, finally =D Something’s wrong with the grammar in this sentence: “The waves connecting our worlds is already frayed” But I also don’t know ...
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Re: Anastasia’s origin: Witch’s wonder, Hell’s hate
Okay, one more thing about Anna~ And already we can see that Anna is a special child by going like “yup, these wild rats, time to make some friends” :3 ...
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Re: Witch’s Wonder, Hell’s Hate: Part Ten
Ohhh the final story. Let’s do this!! Wanted to give a shout out to the italics that REALLY work for me: “He’s helping his dearest wife try to kill me.” ...
May 27 -
Re: Witch’s Wonder, Hell’s Hate: Part Nine
Good morning! I decided to do some catch up with this story line. It is one of my favourites of yours ;3 Already happy that the hand is mentioned =D ...
May 27 -
Re: Centaur Stage CHP 3 {Sanders Sides Fanfiction}
Well then, it’s been a while! “to make sure that the other centaurs, mostly Janus, weren’t panicking.” The other centaurs aren’t allowed in the house? It’s been 2 chapters since ...
May 26 -
Re: Shadow (Chapter 1: Party Time?)
An ordinary week you say, and yet there’s been nothing but tuna sandwiches? XD I wouldn’t call that normal! I feel like you could be doing a bit more to ...
May 26 -
Re: don't light a wet cigarette - chapter 1
Well Nori, the long-awaited follow up to that a bit surreal prologue :3 Ohh I like how you describe the lamps as navigator stars! “Is this how fireflies experience the ...
May 26 -
Re: Late Night
Considering I read the snippet and I liked the charas, let me look at the start of this story too XD Ah it feels like you could use a bit ...
May 26 -
Re: You're A Weapon
Goooooood morning, fellow dice enthusiast!! I am no good with poetry, so let me take a look at your prose instead~ I really like the way you portray the direness ...
May 26 -
Re: The clowns of the circus
Alright this is the dream story. I remember. I even read the tiny snippet that comes between this and the first part XD Maybe this will finally give context to ...
May 25 -
Re: Abigail & Karley: Part 3- The Aftermath (Final Part)
It’s been a while =D Interesting that she eventually does break and answer Karkey’s message, hmmm I know it was a nice evening until the incident and all but I ...
May 25 -
Re: Keir’s abandonment
Well colour me intrigued from that introduction! And Chapter 1 does well to highlight why we do not like his parents! Interesting that the parents think their child will be ...
May 25 -
Re: Alejandro’s story-The adventures of Poppy McLain
YWS is working again!!! Hi creeper! Time for more Poppy!! Oh I like how you phrase Alejandro’s situation! I was right there in the scene with him! That said, I ...
May 24 -
Re: Rosalyn’s origin: The Laurence family’s deepest woes
I don’t have much time today but I still wanted to check out one more of your stories, sitting in the GR ^^ I do like Asher so let’s see ...
May 23 -
Re: The Addicted Roundup
Saw you doing reviews and decided to show up for your story :3 Alrighty let’s head right in: Can you rly slam your head up? You might want to use ...
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