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Re: sink up to the surface
For a second I thought this read "sink down to the surface and was abt to comment on the metaphorical meaning XD But this works very well as is :3 ...
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Re: to god I pray for all your lovers
I like the name of the poem already. Also that it implies we're praying to the god not for us but for someone else. Let's read it now. Ok so ...
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Re: Raisa’s diary entry (5/17/55)
Ok, might as well go further with the Raisa entries~ And the conclusion to the ice cream saga! Aww looks like Raisa misinterpreted Aeliana's expression then (she did think Ael ...
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Re: Raisa’s diary entry (5/16/55)
And Raisa... Ah I remember reading about her. Let me check. Hmmm I guess not. I guess I just saw the title of the story so often, she became real ...
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Re: Jason’s biggest fears
Next up! Jason! I like that you gave the little girl a name; it feels very aappropriate and a necessary step! And Iike how you describe how she's still haunting ...
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Re: When Jeff and Jack met
Good morning! :3 I guess I will take a look at all the stories in this folder now that I was missing out on! Starting with this one! And I ...
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Re: When Henry met William [Henry’s POV]
Heya creeper~ I remembered that I wanted to check out more FNAF :3 First thought is actually: Why did you out “that was his name” in here? “Henry did not ...
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Re: An Ordinary Day in Night City
Hia Nicarose, this is like the third time I attempt to review this in full. Must say that you saying you don’t really want feedback really put a damper on ...
May 30 -
Re: Army Boy: Chapter 4 (DRAFT)
I know there’s been talk abt a review template but I’m a stream of consciousness kinda gal soooo here we go! I remember your first draft of the first chapter ...
May 30 -
Re: DEER EYES chapter 1
Well well well, good morning to you! You have summoned me and I have come! Hmmm I didn’t know windows can be lanky… *blinks* Okay and it’s getting even more ...
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Re: most beautiful thing
Good morning! I was intrigued by your summary, it feels very poetic! I really like the flow of your work. It feels like it sits in the middle of poetry ...
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Re: Sisyphus: Your Wrongs Haunt Me
You know canopy, everytime I go through my spreadsheet of the Green Room, I get stuck on this intriguing title of your poem. And I was always hoping someone who ...
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Re: PETALS OF MY HEART
Good morning! I’m curious about a poem with a reading time longer than 2 min, so let’s see what you have in store ^^ I already like how the first ...
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Re: Through fire and vengeance 1
Good morning! I have finally come for your story; it’s been in the Green Room for long enough ^^ My first thought is that maybe you could have run this ...
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Re: My Black is Beautiful
Hi Dove, I know you said you’ve left the site, but I still wanted to take a look at your poem :hug: I like how you have the bold sentence ...
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