-
Re: Close Walls- Chapter 8
Never mind, Messenger DIDN'T miss this one. You accidentally double posted. Hm let me think of something else to bring up. Ah right! Dialogue formatting is done very well! I ...
Mar 25 -
Re: Chapter 8- Close Walls
I guess Messenger missed this one XD But I didn’t! So maybe the memories story isn’t a dream, but what it says on the tin: memories. Maybe this other story ...
Mar 25 -
Re: Close Walls- Memories
Next story in this series! At least I think this is it :3 Oh and I guess this is right after MC ate the possibly drugged food and now has ...
Mar 24 -
Re: Transformers: Heavy Metal PILOT AKA Before Time Began
Ok since I got accused of only writing short reviews, let me earn my points by finally doing your script =D It has been on my list ever since you ...
Mar 24 -
Re: 🪻🌨️ They all had to watch 🌨️🪻
I usually find your poems quite pleasant so let's see what you have in store this time! *Reads* haha, in store! Didn't know you would use that in the poem ...
Mar 24 -
Re: Close Walls- Chapter 5
Oh that is an excellent first paragraph! Sets the mood really well! I also like how the moment the narrator starts eating, the experience is described in bold. It feels ...
Mar 24 -
Re: Wings of Fire INFECTION AU- based on the wings of fire book 10 ''The Ice''
Hah since I want people to read my fanfiction in a fandom no one but me seems to know about, I guess the first step is also to read fic ...
Mar 23 -
Re: 🍭🫀🎪 Anything is a party if you want it to be 🎪🫀🍭
…I should have known this was gonna be lyrics/a poem. But I am here now so let’s do this! *reads* …and the child’s POV. Hooo boy, we’re gonna be in ...
Mar 23 -
Re: Pigment and Bone
Ah since I have like three reviews to go to the next star, here I am =D Hia Nandinini, how’s it going? Oha I wonder why you chose the world ...
Mar 23 -
Re: A Sunny Day in Sparkle City
Ok I accidentally clicked on this and idk how that happened but i guess i can review it while I'm here =D Love the font :3 Hmmm I wonder why ...
Mar 23 -
Re: The Lie that Saved the World Prologue
Hia Reaper. Dice finally landed on your story and I guess I’ll start in the beginning. You might want to make sure though that the chapters are all neatly ordered ...
Mar 23 -
Re: Jude the painter
Another story that already has one review 😊 Well I feel like your opening paragraph makes me want to know more: they call it a school but it is also ...
Mar 23 -
Re: Daisy hears strange noises
Hia creeper. Saw someone do a review of your most recent story and thought I would also chime in =D Aww that paragraph abt Daisy being unable to sleep for ...
Mar 23 -
Re: After Valentine’s Day (part three) (last part)
Good afternoon! The Green Room finally got chosen again so here I am to finish reading this mini story =D While I like the first paragraph, I kinda don’t feel ...
Mar 22 -
Re: The Devadasi’s Eavesdropper
*another one from the list gets chosen* Hi! Hello! I remember your wallpost about this and I’m one of the people who has no clue about Bharatnatyam but I shall ...
Mar 21
