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Re: The monster within | Chapter Twenty | Luke
Good morning creeper! I wish we would get a quick info on why it is unusual that the parents invite each other? ….innnteresting that Nicole, the guest, can just go ...
Jul 13 -
Re: Brandy’s origin-Siren’s Desire
Good afternoon creeper 😊 Ohh Siren’s desire now, let’s goo! Hmm if you write “none other that Moon’s Beach” I kinda expected the next sentence to be abt what is ...
Jul 12 -
Re: waits
Good afternoon! Okay I do love how the beginning of the poem already reflects how unusual this perspective is. I am especially curious why the last verse of the first ...
Jul 12 -
Re: Beneath God's Weeping Skies
Good afternoon! Love the pictures you added to your poem :3 I also like how consistent you are in the language you’ve used! And that drop after “and I -- ...
Jul 12 -
Re: Xavier-Love in decaying hearts
Hia creeper! I think I remember what Love in Decaying Hearts is all about so let’s head right in :3 I think the first paragraph is a bit too overloaded ...
Jul 12 -
Re: me, myself, & I (places I keep returning to)
Hello Prudence! Saw your poem in the Green Room and showed up to rectify that :3 I am intrigued by the formatting. Is this maybe a reference to the grass ...
Jul 12 -
Re: A shining day out
And another one for today :3 Ohh another meat eater that really enjoys ice cream. I kinda like how ice cream is a positive throughline through all your stories :3 ...
Jul 11 -
Re: When Keir met Mara
Good afternoon creeper =D Ok I do like how we are immediately starting on a creepy note. With Keir emphasizing so much that she didn’t tell him her name, he ...
Jul 11 -
Re: I never asked for this.
Hi Matt, that sounds like a heavy topic here. Hope you’re doing alright. Hmm as for the poem itself, maybe since you have mentioned all the things that “you” are, ...
Jul 11 -
Re: very awed, immensely flawed.
Must say that every time I read the title of your poem it made me more curious abt what it would contain 😊 I really like how the title sounds! ...
Jul 11 -
Re: Ends End Empty
Hia and good morning to you! The summary for this was kinda intriguing, I recently read @rainforest’s poem which did interesting things with placing text and background colours, after all! ...
Jul 11 -
Re: Amias’ second friend
And we have reached the second friend of Amias =D I feel just saying that they are coming up with stories already elevates this play session from the one last ...
Jul 10 -
Re: release
This poem has a colour gradient, multiple even. I love it! And I like how the normal, matter-of-fact description of happiness is toward the white-ish part of the gradient but ...
Jul 10 -
Re: Ilna - Chapter 4
Hi :3 I’m deep in the trenches of the Green Room but I decided to make an exception for your story to review it sooner 😊 Who knew tomatoes could ...
Jul 10 -
Re: A tranquil family gathering
Good morning creeper 😊 It took me a moment to place this story but this line is a good reminder: she still felt her father’s ghost linger, like she always ...
Jul 10
