Tikaya

Good morning Rev. I wanted to read this ages ago but every time I sat down, the wife handed me the baby XD And well, I even tried carrying the ...

And directly onto Part 3 26 Welll if Rob can do all that, listen to them like this, then it DEFINITELY heard the pen on paper. And will wonder why ...

Good afternoon! Let’s head straight into your Part 2 ^^ 23 I like how you are setting the scene. It does feel as if we properly started a new chapter ...

Good morning! (At least I’m starting this in the morning, today is a busy day xd) As promised, I have come to do a full review of this. I didn’t ...

So and now to Ch6, like I originally planned XD (I do like that Ch4 gives more context to why Raven doesn’t want the pendant anymore in Ch5! Tho I ...

Good morning Catz :3 ….and it appears that me being chronically exhausted yesterday caused me to skip a chapter. Why didn’t you mention that q__q Now I feel silly bc ...

Good evening! I have come to you as a member of the Afterwatch so let’s see what you have in store! I like how you immediately dive into the scene ...

Hello Catz! I fixed up something in my own chapter so now I feel confident in reading and reviewing someone else :3 I am a bit confused about the species ...

Good evening! Okay, remember the paragraphing thing? New speaker, new paragraph. I’m afraid that the story continues to be very hard to read and follow ☹ Hmm I do like ...

Ok so the Green Room is getting dangerously close to the limit and I now Rev is also excited. So let’s head straight in! Also a tip: Never ever poison ...

Good morning creeper and congratz on 5 years on YWS :3 Let’s look at more of the siren story today! Hmm I always thought moon beach would also be kinda ...

Good morning! Here for chapter 2 :3 I kinda wish you would have added the actual Czech word here: “Yeah,” Stan’s youngest son said in Czech, XD Huhhh okay I ...

Ohh I like how these breaks in the sentence gives the story a sort of poetry vibe? Like here: A scream that carried pain and suffering. I do think that ...

Hi hello and good morning! What a lovely chapter you have posted here :3 I am not rly sure about the “like a dead tree stump” right in the beginning. ...

Good morning! Let’s head straight into ch2, shall we? I think it is great that you highlighted which narrator is responsible for which section! That works very well! That said, ...