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Re: The death of Hawthorne
Let’s work through the next folder! Since you marked this as “to read whenever” I would really appreciate some sort of context for the first part of this story. Like, ...
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Re: Spark of the Rebellion Chapter 8: life's purpose
And we are back to Jim’s side of the story. I really like Helena believing Jim and defending him before Adrian. Also her “if anyone’s at fault is you” is ...
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Re: Spark of the Rebellion Chapter 7: The Cost of Survival
So after a brief stint into a folder of creeper’s, back to this story 😊 Okay, the convo between the siblings is very confusing which is my own fault for ...
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Re: Beck Katz-The trouble of Carlos
Okay… Time to… read this from Beck’s POV. Loved this description: “his voice knife-tipped and jagged” Beck is as much a sweetheart in his own POV as he was through ...
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Re: Jacklyn Bell-The trouble of Carlos
Oh it sounds like Carlos has earned a reputation. Interesting that no one seems to seriously investigate him, despite all his lovers disappearing on the same night every year… I ...
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Re: Carlos Bardot-The trouble of Carlos [Part Two]
Alright and more Carlos. Let’s see what gruesome thing he does to Beck. I really like Beck’s costume. Here’s a “like” missing: “ It looked the same costume “ I ...
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Re: Carlos Bardot-The trouble of Carlos [Part One]
Oh a long one. Let‘s read the backstory of Carlos. I think I read something of his’ before. I like the intro to the story. Setting the scene and stuff. ...
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Re: Spark of the Rebellion Chapter 6: Crimson Pulse Part 2
Okay so this is the other plot string happening parallel to Troy's. Let's go! So coming into this blind, I had a hard time grasping in what relation these characters ...
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Re: Spark of the Rebellion Chapter 5: Purge
Hallo! I'll start today with a review of this. I read your recap :) Let's head right into it. I like the beginning of the chapter. It sets the tone ...
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Re: purity (defilement)
Alright I think it is time that I try some poetry after doing so many novel chapters today 😊 I’m trying to be scientific today. I see the brackets and ...
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Re: On the Overmorrow Chapter Five- Damage Control
Hi hello 😊 I come with a review for your story (Makes me sound like a creature of nightmares. Hm maybe I am haha) In any case, let’s do this. ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 14
There we go, Shadow is the perfect beginner’s dragon. I knew it :3 Oh I can give dialogue formatting tips for ~telepathy~ today, what a treat! Here: Hmmm? he thought ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 4} Chapter 12
Ahhh forgive me. I didn’t know there were Book 4 chapters still left in the Green Room, otherwise I would have started with those! And they deal with Shadow’s backstory. ...
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Re: Captain of The Rum Barrel // Ch. 2
Hello! If you ever come back, have this review to read 😊 My first thought is actually that you tend to… do a bit of overexplaining. Like for example “the ...
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Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 3: Concerned
Ach Schade. Another good story with 0 reviews. Makes me lose hope that you’ll continue. But hey, maybe I inspire some of the other reviewers with this :3 Alright the ...
Nov 27, 2025
