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Re: The Lockets -- Chapter 3 [Sunshine]
Hey Jashy, Tiger finally here to review. I'm really sorry that I didn't get to this earlier. But now I'm here. Comments will be in bold . Also, I'm using ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1)
Tiger here to review! Comments shall be in bold. Oh and because there aren't many things I needed to point out here, I won't quote the whole story and waste ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Young Writers Literary Journal 2011 Please Help!
Okay I read through all of them, and I think that the best of all is a tie between Dancing With the Darkness and Sarah . Dancing With the Darkness ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: For Him
Hey Sephy! :D Tiger here to review! Comments, as always, shall be in bold . This is for him; just like everything else I have. Is this part necessary? It ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Let's Just Say...
Tiger here to review! Well, barely. So I was going through this, and at first I was correcting what I thought were impossible occurrences. It took me a while to ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Lone Sullen
Tiger here to review. Sorry for the lateness in getting to this, I've been slightly busy. ;) Comments will be in bold . I'm a flickering light An unknown shadow, ...
Dec 13, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter One)
Tiger here to review. Hopefully you can use these as pointers to work on when you continue this. Comments will be in bold (by the way, some comments really were ...
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: No Forgiveness
Tiger here to review! I apologize for not doing this earlier. Comments shall be in bold . A leering, decaying mouth, blood leaking from numerous wounds on the grey mass ...
Dec 9, 2010 -
Re: Alas, the Teacher is Dead
Tiger here to review per request, although this is so short my review may not be too useful. Comments shall be in bold . I walked into my classroom and ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Paradise Found
Tiger here to review per request! Comments shall be in bold . If the world weren't so vast, and my house not as clean 'Not so clean' might sound better. ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Fighting Against the Devil
Tiger here to review per request! Comments shall be in bold . Let it all sink in like ink in your veins and fire in your heart. Let the feelings ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Worlds of Serendipity (prologue)
Tiger here to review the most anticipated novel on YWS! ;) Comments shall be in bold . Worlds of Serendipity Prologue She was a deep contrast with the white snow. ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Hannah's Heartbreak
I wrote this song for my friend at her request in exchange for a painting of a unicorn. Hannah's songĀ I'm trying... Is the ellipsis necessary? I read on a ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: The Cherry Code- Prologue
All I could see was a blur of colour whizzing by me. I could hear only the crunching of the dead leaves beneath my feet and the wind howling in ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Nikita Bearder
This is all true! and there will be more soon when we have more moments to write about! ********************************* "I have just had an idea!" The four of us turned ...
Nov 28, 2010
