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Hi, Tiger here for a review, This is an interesting short story, and from the little I've read of Kafka I would say it's somewhat Kafkaesque in its oddness. You ...

Hi Huda, The plot of your story itself is interesting, and is certainly suspenseful or strange enough to induce a reader to move to the next chapter/section. But as another ...

I'll admit, straight off, that I found this piece strangely beautiful. Beautiful, I think, because you captured almost perfectly the near-total disorientation of insobriety, and this is reflected in a

Tiger here, I promised and here I am to review your prologue! :D I haven't done one of these in a long time, so let's hope the standard's good enough, ...

Coincidentally, we are the exact same age, so let me get a word in about this. a) As previously mentioned, critiques are reviews given to guide a writer towards improvement. ...

Hey Azi, it's Tiger here to review. Okay. I've read this, re-read it, and read this again. Now I think I understand--mostly--what the story is about. At the very least, ...

I guess I can't exactly nitpick the story too much, seeing as you had to use certain lines. I still can't help feeling that it could have been less cliche ...

Good evening (over here, anyway), I'm Tiger and I'll be your friendly neighbourhood reviewer today. :D Before getting into the actual story, I've got three nitpicks: -The title (at least ...

Alright, here to do a little reviewing per the request. :) I'll only quote small bits that I find important to point out. The first paragraph is a good opener, ...

Hey, I'm Tiger and I'll be your friendly YWSerhood reviewer today. Since this is a short piece, I'll quote the whole thing and do a bit of line-by-line nitpicking. “Happy ...

There's not really much for me to say, really. I love this story. It demonstrate the chain of action and reaction, and the chains caused by inaction (if that, ah, ...

Hey Tictac, my name is Tiger and I'll be your (possibly harsh) reviewer today. I will quote your work and brief comments will be in bold; longer ones will be ...

A quick, interesting poem. Without delving too deeply into the subject matter, you're able to get across your feelings and emotions during this religious time. I know little of Ramadan, ...

Tiger, here for a contest review! This was really funny. The reference to Jash was great, as was the YWS spirits. I can easily imagine us hanging around a creepy ...

Hey, tink! Here to review for the contest. :) This was an interesting concept. And then there's this line: She did, and it was even better, this racoon was high ...