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Hey I like this poem, but it just seems like a story in stanza form. I feel as if you could make it flow more. T

Hey I really really like this. Its cute and funny, and sweet. Did you actually write this as a valentine to someone? Really creative, and nice to read Good Job ...

Hey Your so right, you didn't say you were the best, but your attitude said it for you. You take critisism in a bad way, why not use it to ...

I agree lake girls

Hey i really liked you poem alot, but i think you could put a little more emotion in your words. Then it will be alot better. Good Luck T

Hey You show talent when you write. I love this haiku i thought it was amazing, and i agree with you about the way you described the seasons. Good job ...

Hey! I liked it. It was both creative and funny, in a modern day Dr.seuss kind of way. But i would suggest changing some words around. Good job T

I like this poem. It says it like things are. You are straight out about your feelings for the topic, and i admire you for your bravery. T

Here's my Haiku Haiku, hard to write But me, i beg to differ. Could be my talent. I love haikus

This poem made me confused... but i still like it :)

This is a really good poem. I like the way its put together, God job T

I like it

I tried to space them but it wont work:( and thanks for the tip Kyte

This is really funny aha, clever lady.But how is this a story

Very good