Tiaradyson

I agree!

I agree...

This was a short story for Creative writing, I was given a sentence to write a 3-6 page story out of it. So thank you

This was not a story it was a class project, thank you for your negative feed back cause I felt the same way about it being obvious. Ehhhh yes in ...

I totally agree with you! Thank you

It's actually a type of poem that is suppose to be written this way. The proud family was meant to be in there because it is part of a child ...

AWE! That is the sweetest review. :D

No, because all you did was put a ---------- to separate it. When all you had to say was, you ran down stairs and kissed your mothers cheeks and dashed ...

Btw it's okay to have description. It adds more imagery. Yes there could be too much, but I felt there wasn't enough, not every chapter needs action. Some can be ...

I love the way you put that and I see it that way too! The def. of sense. quite hard too, when you can barely define it yourself

Great poem! I can resemble and it was deep. moving and sad. Very vivid writing tho, I had problems reading it, I do suck at reading lol I think would ...