Thriver

Thriver here. I am happy to say, I see no errors! Good work! It's a superb story, though I got a little bit confused while reading. I'll be happy to ...

You are welcome. English is not a difficult language to learn. It's not my first language too. It takes a bit of dedication though. I'd be glad to help.

You are welcome. English is not a difficult language to learn. It's not my first language too. It takes a bit of dedication though. I'd be glad to help.

This is awesome! Great work! "I am not scenery. And you are not scenery. But together, we are all something beyond sight." Nice ending! Love the structure. Superb poem! I ...

Well, thanks!

Thanks!

The whole poem is a metaphor and symbolic. It all depends with the readers understanding and the connection with the society. I wrote it under the basis of culture

You welcome

The repetitive use of Mommy is just like the way a child keeps on calling to her mother

Thanks for the review. The use of the bird was symbolic. It was used to represent somebody who was clouded by a culture he was forced to follow. But he ...

Thanks for the review, and the welcome.

Somebody clouded up with darkness and evil, but he wants to be different. In his on way,and a good way.

Hmmm....now this is one interesting poem. Love it! It's full of imagery and they all make sense. That is great! It's about the persona's flow of life, both easy and ...

Hmmm....now this is one interesting poem. Love it! It's full of imagery and they all make sense. That is great! It's about the persona's flow of life, both easy and ...

Thanks. I'll see what I can do