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  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Life Monologue

    Legacy here. I usually don't leave just a comment but I will do so. That sounds so sucky for a lack of a better word. If you need someone to ...

    May 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Technology Re: destination f*cked

    Okay.

    May 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Pain and Joy

    Thank you for the review. If you have the time, could you review some of my other pieces besides muse and see if I executed the emotion well or not?

    May 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Muse

    Thank you for the review.

    May 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Muse

    Thanks for the review. I have the mark for confusion and effect. It makes sense to me :). I think you would enjoy my other works if you ever get ...

    May 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Pain and Joy

    I see that now. :)

    May 22, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Muse

    Thank you for the review. I will fix that.

    May 22, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Muse

    Thank you for the review dragon. I will fix that slight grammatical error. And the question mark is for effect.

    May 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Pain and Joy

    Thank you. I made some of the edits you recommend. If you have the time, could you look at some of my other poems and review those as well. Legacy.

    May 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Pain and Joy

    If you like this work, you can check out some of my other ones. I believe I still have others in the Green room if you want to rescue those ...

    May 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Pain and Joy

    Thanks for the review.

    May 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Swimming on my Own

    Aw thank you. If you like this, you might like my other ones :)

    May 22, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Swimming on my Own

    Thank you for the review.

    May 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Swimming on my Own

    Okay thank you.

    May 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Swimming on my Own

    I see where you are coming from. I just put the pause at the end because I wanted that one line to have more emphasis.

    May 19, 2017


You cannot have a positive life and a negative mind.
— Joyce Meyer