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Slow and steady The rain falls Eyes of pane glass Drops glide past Lightning strikes serenity The wind howls with wisdom Eyes of pane glass Drops glide past Pollen over ...

Hi! This may or may not be a review. =P There was some great word-play here, June: "unsecured peace and secured dread", "fear casted us, and we cast fear" "grasps ...

Hey Izzy! Review time. =D It happens, Without farce Or reason. Not sure whether the second line you wanted "force" or not. "Farce" is a word but I don't know ...

Hi Jasmine! This is James. Welcome to YWS! I don't mean to be "that guy" but typically here at YWS we want members to have about 2 reviews for every ...

Okay, I'll be reviewing your haiku - but it'll be short, just to warn you. Darkness and coldness, Fright and screams of death and jeers; This is what I fear. ...

Hey! I'll just say now that this isn't much of a review, but oh well! I love you darling dear, I love you way too much. You’re like the bitter ...

This isn't even close to a critique, really. I just wanted to say that that was truly incredible. Anything that I could say to help has most likely already been ...

Nearly five years ago was this topic last commented on. That's...a lot of time. I wonder who will find it and comment after me. I wonder if Lindsey07 will be ...

Hey, Flower~Child! This is James. It's apparent that you're trying to get some feelings out here, and it seems like you write of something many people can relate to. However, ...

Hey, Snoink! :] I'ma review your piece now. Whoever taught you how to dance? Your posture is a disgrace! Right at the beginning here I love how strong your voice ...

Everything I've come to realize as a possible mistake I've later passed off as something you surely did purposely. It's frustrating, but in a good way? Grammatically, of course, you ...

Hey, Adam! It's James. I didn't thoroughly read what anybody else has said, so please forgive me if I repeat anything. I hope to be of at least a minuscule ...

Hello there, Blue Socks! This is James, and I'll be reviewing this. Granted, this is Chapter Two, and I haven't exactly read Chapter One, but what the heck? Oh and ...

Welcome to YWS. First of all, at the risk of sounding like a jerk, you should have posted at least two reviews by now, but I see out of your ...

A very strong, well-written account. I can really see all of this happening, and the fact that you're able to recognize decisions like that as selfish is an ability not ...