This poem is good and powerful! Sorry if my skills for criticizing aren't really good. I barely review another person's work with lots of words, like I almost everyone here does. Anyways, I just need to review so that I can save up points, no offense. But, I really liked this piece.
Here's the only thing I noticed that seemed wrong:
Standing there with your feet to the floor
Didn't you mean, "Standing there with your feet on the floor"?
It's all right, though, it bothers me.
Keep up the good work!