Thesilent

This was good, but it felt a little crouded too. The flow was great and the details were very smooth. I liked the time period you had this in, as ...

Very beautiful! I love how you had it be so simple yet so meaningful all at once. It flows beautifuly like the breeze mentioned in the poem, and when you ...

I really can relate to this and it's a little scary, but it's true and beautiful all the same. The concept seems so simple yet you take it to a ...

This was very intreging, as it dived right into the action. Your descpritons were amazing and I loved how you had such smooth transitions from each scene to the next. ...

This is beautiful :) it gives off a sense of wonder, and I can really visualize the whole thing. It also give me this shakspeareane feeling as well, since it ...

It's short but quite beautiful. I have to wonder what your insperation for this was... i hope you make more like this though, since its actually really calming to read. ...