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Hey there. I'm going to review this for you. Corrections and alternatives are in bold. I couldn't hear myself think over the pounding of the bar's loud obnoxious oldies, men ...

Hey Ranger, I saw you had written something so I had to read it. Well, first off I LOVED it. That fact that it is so true with people that ...

Hello Dante, I'm Theo. It's been awhile since I've reviewed poetry, so forgive me if I stumble. First off, I would like to say that this is a very good ...

Here it is Paladin, as promised. It wasn’t expected to find Malcolm – science whizz and DnD player dead, at his dorm of all places. People gave him a lot ...

Hello, I am Theo, and I would like to review your piece tonight. Lee This has been going on for weeks! Where is this going, If (Should be lower case) ...

Hi, Lette! Well, I have to say that after reading this, you got the personalities of Edward and Bella very well. But I have to say that I don't like ...

Amazing! I am laughing so hard right now. This time I actually got the song playing right with it, it fits! I can't stop laughing with this one. You had ...

Hello there, I will attempt to critique your poem. Here goes. I live in a land of sorrow, Where all I feel is pain. Okay, this is a great start. ...

Nice!!!!! I loved it! Even though I don't read the series, I still know the background and everything. It followed the rhythm perfectly, I commend you for this. It was ...

Wow... That is all I have to say at this point. I do love Twilight, but I'm not obsessed with it. I have to say that this is one of ...

Hi! This made me laugh. I really like it, too, even though it is a bit rough. I'll try to add some grammar to where I think it would fit. ...

Hi. This is very good. Short ans simple. I love the way the words flow together and almost create the swaying of the leaves in the wind. I think you ...

Hi, this is my first critique on a script so bear with me. I like the way you built up to the story, but is the living room in a ...

Hi there, I just want to say that this was a very sweet and simple poem, although it conveys alot of feeling in very few lines. I do agree with ...

I loved this book, I bought it before I even read it. I love her as a writer. This book is a little bit different than her others. I had ...