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I am entitled to say that I dissagree entirely on this whole subject matter. Enough said. (:

Thanks for the advice. This was just a quick little story I wrote for a friend that took me about three minutes. I enjoyed it, so I posted it. If ...

Thanks for the good reviews. This Black Lake mystery isn't even the central mystery in the story. It's more like one out of many. But I don't want to give ...

I liked it and I don't need to critisize. I'm sure other people will do that for me. Although I have very little to critisize here.

Thank you KitxKat:D

I give little hints to what a fester looks like here and there and I trust that the reader can use there own imagination to figure out what it looks ...

I'll review it tommarow Arthur. Gotta go slee. e_e I'm tired.

I realized I made a lot of errors when writing this. So I'll fix it later. This was only a prologue, not the whole story.

Thanks. (:

Thanks. I'll fix that. I kind of thought there was something wrong when I read over all of those line breaks.

I liked it. eight out of ten. I take two off because I didn't really understand to much of what was going on. Good job though. Keep going with it. ...

Awwwesome. I loved it. Sounded like a nursery rythmn but better. :D Although I do like nursery rythmns---some of them.

Thanks for the review everyone. I did realize the rythm of it was a bit choppy but I just wrote from my heart and kept it as I made it ...

Haha. Funny thing for the UPS guy to hand someone a coconut. Shouldn't it have been in a box for someone to open?

I take that back. It wasn't lacking. It was just a bit confusing.