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  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Writers Block

    That is the point of the poem lol

    Sep 5, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Bike rides in Berlin

    I kinda want to start again with my poems. Clean slate init

    Apr 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: deleted

    Thanks, your review was very helpful and I think I will expand part three into a wider poem.

    Oct 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: deleted

    Every single line being capitalised is optional in poetry, it wouldn't work in this instance I think. Thanks for reviewing

    Oct 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: True Light

    :)

    Aug 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: True Light

    You're welcome, but what for?

    Aug 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Natural Hazards

    *Those adjectives were added in as metaphors to describe how the character's relationship was* But I don't want to ruin any interpretations so I'll leave it at that. XP

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Natural Hazards

    The title is more in reference to people than the hurricane as its a natural disaster. Thanks for reviewing.

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Natural Hazards

    That's it exactly. Thanks for reviewing

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Natural Hazards

    Thanks for the review

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: True Light

    Thanks for reviewing

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: True Light

    Thanks for reviewing.

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Bike rides in Berlin

    Hi, everything was intentionally lowercase. I've explained the title below in a comment on the first review.

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Bike rides in Berlin

    Thanks

    Aug 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Bike rides in Berlin

    Thank you

    Aug 4, 2014


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