TheWarriorMingan

Wow, a very interesting poem, Alliyah! I must admit I would have to do further analysis to understand it all. (I'm not much of a poet.) It's cool how you ...

LOL. I love this poem! I've spotted just a few grammatical errors: Arms & Hammers I'm not sure if you meant to put these words in plural. Just checking. nothing ...

Hey, Scribe! I'm back for chapter two. This is great, except I get the feeling that you're favoring Luke over Leia. Although, I would have liked to see Ahsoka feel ...

Hello, FireEyes! I'm here for a quick review. I think it's neat that you wrote poems based on a book, I should try that sometime. No one here is happy ...

Wow! I'm intrigued! I'm here for a short review because I'm in a hurry. This is my favorite part: The book tells me of adventures. The tales of Good and ...

Hello, Scribe! First of all, I'd like to tell you that I've been waiting FOREVER for a Star Wars Fanfic! I'm so excited that you're writing one, and about Ahsoka! ...

I enjoyed this chapter more than the last one! Let's go on and review: Cassy grabbed some grocery bags and began putting the new jug of milk into the fridge. ...

Wow! That was great. I love how you wove some greek mythology into it with the Medusa. Okay, here are my thoughts: Anyway, Mrs. Tiffany Harris was in the middle ...

This poem makes me sad, but it also makes me realize the truth in all of it. No, there are very few mothers doing things like that anymore. (I'm very ...

Hi, May! I just read parts one and two. Here are my first thoughts: One: Wait! They're using frogs, again! Two: Oh, it's Wyatt's fault. That makes more sense. (After ...

I. Love. This. Poem. You've truly captured heartbreak. (Trust me, I know a lot about that.) "how many times can you pretend before it breaks you how many bruises can ...

*Sigh.* I had a puppy once, for about a week. She was brown. My dad made us get rid of her because he said that the neighbors said she was ...

Hi, EuphoriaFalls! First of all, I like this story. I would like to know more. Alright, let's dive into the review! "Her lantern is grasped before her, illuminating her steps." ...

Hi, Shanya Basu! First of all, I love your poem. I felt hope in it. BTW, I caught a small typo, here: About me ,making up rumors. Just close up ...

Chikara, Chikara. You've done it again! You've left me spellbound and speechless. My favorite part was the very end, "I say I am everything." This left the warmness in my ...