TheWalkinDude

Okay, first off, good poem. It's nice, it seems to flow well, or at least to me it does, and your kind of play on words is intriguing. I especially ...

Wow. This poem blew me straight out of the water, took me from left field. I'm pretty surprised at how well this poem reads for being an acrostic poem, as ...

Congratulations on foretelling me at the beginning that this poem isn't your best, because now I'm wondering what kind of stuff you write normally. Anyways, Nice poem you've got here. ...

Is it a ring worm? I read this a few times over and I'm thinking this is about a ring worm. Also, you said parasitology, and that means parasites, and ...

I tend to always find the more interesting stuff on YWS, don't I? This is interesting in both the plot and how it's written. What this reminds me of is ...

Ohh, man, this is heart-wrentchingly toughing. This almost hurts to read, yet I keep on so because I want to know more. My father was in the hospital during the ...

Hmm, kuddos on the sweet story, Chryssa! I really like a good werewolf story, and this didn't disappoint me. My main concerns are only grammatical and spelling, which I have ...

My soul experiences the ripples of a thousand corpses being dropped into a pit of fluid despair. Nice imagery here. Very cataclysmic. Each ring hits me with more ripping, agonizing ...

T hey were forgotten in the rush and anticipation of age, as wrinkles settled into weathered skin, where scars had ripped their place into being- the dreams eroded from my ...

Hmm... very interesting. From what you said about this poem, there is no real reason to review it in all honesty. I mean, by just reading this you can tell ...

Wow. Simply, wow. If I had read this in person with you, I would have stood up and very slowly started clapping until miraculously a loud round-of-applause started sounding off ...

For a poem written on the draw, must say, well-done. I really liked this poem, mostly because I felt that connection to the main narrator. I'm a bit of a ...

Well, I must say, this is different. I'm still a little confused about the subject and the idea of this. Are you planning on expanding on it sometime? Are you ...

Wow, very nice poem. Well, nice as in you keep on top of the subject the whole way through. There wasn't any squandering around or just flip-flopping, which is always ...

Well, must say, now I think I want to read this book! It sounds to me like a good book about an artistic woman who got pregnant and then left ...