TheWalkinDude

Image is my life, I only go skin deep. Without a brain, I'm looking good but I find I cannot speak. I liked how you opened the poem with a ...

Can we fall in love this way? I really like things that start off with a question. To me, it makes me think, "What can this mean? Why does the ...

Must say, I like the simplicity of this, but I'm just a tad confused on it, though that may just be me who thinks that. As far as rhythm and ...

Ahh, giving. Such a great feeling to give. So, for my gift to you, help and guidance for your contest entry: This is for the December contest! It took me ...

[Corrections and thoughts marked in red .] This is for Trident's 'Three-Pronged Contest'. " No, I’m not interested, sorry, goodbye. " The door slams in Ed’s face sending tiny globules ...

I know this isn't a real review, but I still have got to say how much I liked this poem. It really hit home for me. I was nearly in ...

Life depends on nature. Nature Depends on life. Just wondering: is there a specific reason you capitalized "Depends"? To me, unless you have a specific reason for emphasizing that particular ...

This is a nice poem, Idraax. I really like the simplicity and the swaying rhythm. It kind of gives a sense that it should be read really slow and subtly, ...

You make me wonder, how does your mind work? Mine works fine yet you make me go berserk. Okay, these two lines ae good. I like this beginning, starting out ...

Hehehe! Oh, man, I had to get off the floor laughing to put in this comment. I must say, this is a very amusing piece of work. I don't think ...

Laugh at me if you want to Hide from me if you can Let me sink into you Like quick sand This line is a little bit akward. Maybe try ...

This is simply an enthraling story! Normally, I go for English and grammar corrections, but it would seem Daydreamer above me has already gone over those points, so I will ...