TheUnknownWriter

Thank you so much for this review! Yeah, this poem is just one that I wrote when I was trying to get rid of the thoughts in my head so ...

Sounds great! There's more detail giving it a more suspenseful mood. :D

Thank you so much for the feedback! Now that I look back at the capitalization I think I would agree. And thank you for pointing out the conjoining words- I ...

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate the advice. And I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I'll keep your suggestions in mind :D

Thank you! I really appreciate it! :D

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :D

Thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed it! :D This was super helpful and I'll make some revisions. Thanks again! :)

Yes, you're correct. I've actually been trying to overcome it myself but I'm still working on it- talking isn't one of my fortes :P I'm glad that you liked it ...

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you liked it. I'll take your advice into consideration. :)

Thanks for the review! I appreciate the feedback :D

I ain't no pro fisher. But I can catch it, catch it. And I could cook and dish her? That's all I got XD Oh and I was just suggesting, ...

Thank you for the review! I'll be sure to fix the grammatical errors. Thank you again! :D

I knew that there was something wrong with my wording :P Towards the end the sense of imagery was lacking a bit. Thanks for letting me know it was unclear ...

Yeah, keep it up! But I highly suggest editing it on your own that way you can improve on areas you might need to work on. The only way to ...

This is great! I noticed the simlish that they were speaking is actually accurate. I think I heard some of the dialogue in the game XD