TheTruthLiesWithin

Hey! I'm back here, as promised. :) This might be a bit long... I'm a nitpicker :) So here I go! Whatever it was, I watched her with intent as ...

Hello there Nissa :) Truth here for a review! First, I'll start with the nitpicks... what can I say, I'm a nitpicker! Silently, I exhaled seeing my foggy breath puff ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth! Alright, let's get on with that review, shall we? May 2010 Why those-them ? My face flushes with anger and this time , comma I ...

For everything there is a season For poppy's die ,comma and poppy's bloom Whether fate's a myth , comma or reason For everything there is a season LOVED this. A ...

Hey Twinzy :) I know this is not meant to be corrected, but you know me... I could not restrain myself from it! xO So here it is.. my corrections! ...

Hey there :) I used to spend hours staring at that picture, as though by looking at her , comma when she was a ten year old , comma I ...

Hey Jenn :) Here as promised! Let's start, shall we? First, some nitpicks.. You would still see her blue walls and white carpet, her bed with the tempurpedic mattress and ...

This is good, I can actually see the metaphor pretty good, after I read your little note there :) I love the words you chose and all of it, really. ...

Death lives through Me I'm debating weather this would sound better with the line above? and humanities sins. We dine together sometimes, And rid all of the has-beens. A world ...

Hey there! I'm Truth, nice to meet you :) I'll start with the nitpicks.. About three weeks ago, my mom had told me we'd be leaving for Florida. You missed ...

Hello there :) I'm Truth, and I shall review your work tonight! Alright, let's start with the unpleasant, the nitpicks... A single guard ran by, puffing hard and searching for ...

So that’s a yes , comma indefinitely A heartbeat, make it one, two and three Love this! You closed your tired eyes And open them to my own uncertainty Is ...

Hello :) I'm Truth and I shall be your reviewer tonight! Let's start with the most unpleasant... “Hurry up; if I miss seeing the new guys I’m so going to ...

Hey again! "Alyss!" roared Mrs. Skye. Everyone, including me, jumped their of our seats 'Our' should be 'their', because everyone is a singular noun, it represents a group. One could ...

Hey You :) "'Thanks for seating me next to Alexandria' what the hell was that?" I asked. I had turned my back on Charlie , comma "You didn't actually have ...