TheTruthLiesWithin

Hey again :) Again, awesome reviews above, so I'll stick with overall. Overall, I really like the change of POV, it's more personnal that way. I really love :) Also, ...

Hey Amie :) Truth here as requested! The others above have already made amazing reviews, so excuse me if I've got no nitpicks for you. You did an amazing job ...

Hey there :) Truth here to review! Wow. I really like this. Amazing. I can relate to this so much and you definitely expressed the feelings very well. It's not ...

Hey Wicked :) This looks very promising. It's well written, intense and just leaves me a bunch of question to be answered. All the other above pointed out the mistakes ...

Hey there :) Truth here to review! First off... the format is horrible. It's just horrible. I'll reformat as I review, if you don't mind :) Chapter 3 Mr. Morgan ...

Hello! Truth here to review :) Authors Note: It's a bit rough, and a bit small for my liking, but rip it to shreds as best you can. :D When ...

Hello there :) Truth here for a review! August 29th 2009 It was sort of systematic how she climbed over the railings. She had done it so many times before ...

Hey Lily :) Here for a review! I watch him, dazed, in the silence of the greatness of his music filled is bare yet , comma he has filled it. ...

Hello :) How do you make a word tell a story Of a unexplained murder , comma Or a thrilling adventure ? How do you make one syllable Shout a ...

Hello there :) Truth here for a review! As that last breath escaped your lips, its ashen smoke forming in swirling rings , comma Comma here, and not period because ...

Hello there :) Truth here for a review! The great big dog lowered into a play bow , comma then scampered out of the way , comma as Phillip kicked ...

Hey Flux :) So I started reading this and was totally absorbed by second paragraph, it was like a movie in my head. I really love the way you are ...

Hello! Truth here for a review :) Hey guys! So, Just to warn you, I suck at poetry. Out of everything in this world, poetry is the thing I'm the ...

This is a poem about how through out the years we went to school on Valentines day, what we did, how we acted, and what we wished. It is about ...

Hello! Here I am for a review :) First, this looks really good so far, let's get onto corrections, shall we? Chapter One Part One Everyone has that messed up ...